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Reviewed By: Aurian Datenshi On: May 29, 2007 23:26 EDT
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so its moony, padfoot, prongs, and wormtail and then Harry wil lbe a black cat... shadow? something about whiskers? it would be cute if somone was calling Harry wiskers.... now it would be interesting if Harry started getting slightly cat liek traits... longer canines, fain whiskers....
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Reviewed By: new-moongirl On: May 27, 2007 11:39 EDT
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'm glad that kakashi relized that ruka was real. :D nice so far! XD
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was an awesome chapter! Damn it, made me cry T.T I feel bad about Kakashi and glad that he finally realized that they were real and that he was safe. Good job and hope to read more soon. ^.^
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA __not logged in___ On: May 26, 2007 16:23 EDT
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Shadow would be a good name. Ash would as well.
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Title: vote
Reviewed By: Darkrah Black On: May 23, 2007 19:39 EDT
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I really enjoy this fanfic and would like to suggest that Harry's animungus form be a runespoor... A venomous magical three headed snake with three personalities. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: kathyo On: May 08, 2007 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful as always! what an awful cliffie to leave us on though!. I think Harry's beast should be either a gryphon, dragon (the japanese kind of course), or a winged panther. If you really wanted to throw folks for a loop, - and voledemort as well -it could also be silver kitsune(we all know how good the ninjas from Leaf feel about foxes) or a quetzlcoatl. even if the winged serpent resembles a dragon a little bit. I hope kakashi does regain his mind and sanity back. Loved how Harry kidnapped Pomphrey. Please keep up the great work and update soonest
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Title: idea for animal
Reviewed By: Aurian Datenshi On: May 07, 2007 00:24 EDT
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Reviewed By: Drac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading your fics on aff.net and, by sheer dumb luck, found you here when a friend pointed me over. I have always enjoyed your work, now more than ever with the other titles I've found. Personal preference, a feline of somesorts does seem good, but perhaps some kind of canine would also be good. For magical, I'd say maybe a dark pheonix or a blck griffen. Keep the coloring in line with his hair but also show how much power he has in him. After all, aren't magical animagi forms supposed to be impossible? ;)
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Reviewed By: Silvermist1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 16:44 EDT
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He should be magical after all he was shocked, hmm...maybe a dragon although that's rather large how about a...tree sprite? aka Bowtruckle. That would be hilarious. Great chapter keep up the good work
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Title: Love for Chapter 16 +Animagus Form Suggestions
Reviewed By: SilverGreeneye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 15:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Okay so what should he be? Magical or muggle animal? What one?" I remember reading in several somewheres (not sure if it was cannon or fannon) that an animagus could not take the form of a magical creature. Well, you said he was shocked, so maybe he should be a magical creature. After all, as Remus said, he is prone to "shocking people by doing the impossible." As for what that creature should be, I'm not familiar enough with the cannon Potter-verse to have many ideas. The only magical creatures I can think of are all equine-based, unicorns and hippogriffs and such. Then again, since his cousin is shinobi, he could be a Japanese magical creature, though that might get him accused of being a demon vessel back in Konoha. On the other hand, maybe Harry should be a kangaroo. I'd love to see a kangaroo rear back on its tail and kick Voldemort in the head. That would be awesome, not to mention hilarious.
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Reviewed By: new_moongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 10:00 EDT
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harry should be......a ferret! XD i love ferrets. :D more soon! more soon! :D
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Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 03:11 EDT
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this story is so good. u need 2 keep writing chappie's 4 it. is kakashi going to be a werewolf vampire or nither? can't wait to find out!!
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Reviewed By: ME!!! On: March 30, 2007 21:23 EDT
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awesome story. i love him
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: March 28, 2007 07:30 EDT
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Here's what you asked for: Kakashi is still fully human, but in really really bad shape, after all the bad guys have been studying him since he's obviously not a normal muggle. Iruka goes along and goes ballistic at the sight of his lover. There that's my opinion as to what should happen. Hmmm...maybe run into some of Harry's 'friends' I use the term loosely. Great chapter hope I get to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: ChildofLight 051 Kiraya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing, it's definately an original plotline, though there's room for improvement, of course... there's no such thing of perfect. What I found lacking was enjoyment. It's a good story, but not one I could sit down and read the entire story at once.
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