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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: March 28, 2007 07:30 EDT
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Here's what you asked for: Kakashi is still fully human, but in really really bad shape, after all the bad guys have been studying him since he's obviously not a normal muggle. Iruka goes along and goes ballistic at the sight of his lover. There that's my opinion as to what should happen. Hmmm...maybe run into some of Harry's 'friends' I use the term loosely. Great chapter hope I get to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: ChildofLight 051 Kiraya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing, it's definately an original plotline, though there's room for improvement, of course... there's no such thing of perfect. What I found lacking was enjoyment. It's a good story, but not one I could sit down and read the entire story at once.
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Reviewed By: kathyo On: March 22, 2007 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not sure about the Harry/Neji pairing. I would love to see the look on Orochimaru's face if there is a situation where Harry gets to order Ori's snakes to leave! Also, how did Hedwig find him??? Will the Death Eaters ever make an appearance? And Harry should learn some martial arts for his own protection. BTW, couldn't Harry just use the Accio spell to have his wand and stuff come to him? Please update soonest! My e-mail is Tuborgwolf@msn.com
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Reviewed By: KittaBaby On: February 16, 2007 15:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! I like the fact that Harry has found a way to access his magic without his wand. On a seperate note: Is this the site that you use to update more frequently? Do you have a group (ie. yahoo groups)? If so could you let me know, I would like to join. kitta_baby@rogers.com
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Reviewed By: KittaBaby On: February 13, 2007 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know much about Naruto but I like the way you have incorporated Harry into a totally new life style. This is the first story I have come accross with this type of plot line. I have even started to watch Naruto because of this fic. Also the Negi/Harry pairing is a cute twist. From what I've read Negi seems to be a hard character (quite like Snape but not so bitter). I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 22:17 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter nine I had to laugh at the end talking about Lee and Gai's outfits. LOL interesting first meeting between Neji and Harry ahem Hiroshi. I hope he meets Naruto soon, or did he...no I don't think he's met him yet. I can't remember when this is taking place gah! Hmm...Scarier then Ibiki...Voldemort, and maybe Snape, although I don't know maybe Snape and Ibiki are on the same level of scarriness. I hope you update soon I love all your stories.
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Reviewed By: sea rhapsody On: November 10, 2006 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! I really love your story! Please, you must update soon! Please! Personaly I wonder what will happen when Iruka and Kakashi find out exactly what harry's been through. And you should also have them put there relationship out in the open.
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: November 07, 2006 03:19 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Hiro would be a good nickname. I do hope that Harry/Hiro hooks up with Neiji. Hmmm...about the relationship between Iruka and Kakashi I don't quite understand the reasoning for keeping it hidden. Well hopefully you'll explain it more fully later. Keep up the good work. (I hope your muse kicks in on New Family soon) ttfn. Mist
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Reviewed By: Ang_Avalonis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 22:53 EST
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So far the story is really good. I think for shortening the name, I thing Hiro would do fine for a nickname. Update soon!!! Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: October 19, 2006 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed this chapter, and while I still think Neiji and Harry would be a great pairing I can understand why you're leaning towards no pairing for Harry. Gaara and Lee are still my number one fave pairing for Naruto. Just please don't pair Sasuke with Naruto, I really don't like that pairing. Of course even if you do I'll still love your story.
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 11:21 EDT
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I can't wait until your next update. This story is intresting. Keep up the good work and please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 07:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! What a cliff hanger, but we all know you won't kill him off in the first two chapters. For pairings I vote for Neiji and Harry (of course my favorite pairing in the Naruto verse is Gaara and Lee) I hope you update all of your stories soon.
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you realize how much I want to hurt you with that ending. Evil! I gotta drop a review via mm.org because ff.net was being an SOB again. I think I'll be wiping my cookie jar soon ><
I admit I never in a million years saw Iruka coming. I was honestly expecting the standard Uchiha but then I guess I should have remembered who was writing this. You don't do standard. Dumb me. As someone pointed out to me earlier, have you thought of a Harry/Haku? Both are fifteen with similar backgrounds and both are weapons (some moreso than others ^^') Plus Haku is an awesome character! Just a thought.
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Reviewed By: Twin Kats [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 14:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have made a wonderful story! Actually, I love all of your stories, every single one, even if I don't review. Question! Do you have a FFN account? Just a question as I thought I saw one or two of your stories on FFN. Well ta ta for now! Peace and God Bless TK Twin Kats
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Reviewed By: angelsinheaven87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 09:46 EDT
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YaY!!!! A very interesting starting!!! Hmmmmm pairings that i luv is naruto with sasuke!! they make such cutty couple! And Harry with Kakashi= HOT! Cant wait to read more hope you update soon. p.s when they leave......did harry take back his wand???? If not how can he use his magic as wnadless seems to be very taxing for him......
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