| "Confronting the father" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: free-sprit (to lazy to log in) On: April 28, 2007 07:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
somehow i think ya not gonna update this.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: vcelestialgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Although I noticed the characters were a bit OCC. Such as King Vegeta. But, it's okay I guess. Nevertheless, enjoyable plot.
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Title: niiiiice
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 20:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I was reading that! then it just suddenly stops! Love it update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Nairobidawn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Amelia21 On: November 28, 2006 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. The chapter was fitting so don't change it. :)
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great STORY!! OMG keep going!!
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Reviewed By: Inch Girl On: November 08, 2006 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is... well .... I cant really describe it fully.Its well written, has and engaging storyline that I hadnt thought of before and Im hooked. Plz continue I cant wait to see what King Vegeta has to say.
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Reviewed By: guess_who_32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright thats just downright mean, come on update plz! this fic. seem to be going some where, unlike most stories surrounding this general idea. Best of luck with future chapters.
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Title: Gtreat Story
Reviewed By: Elf of Sollana On: October 15, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has wonderful creativity.Never read a story like or similar to it.Can't wait for the next chapter.Keep up the good work.=)
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Title: nice..! :)
Reviewed By: roar On: October 09, 2006 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. Never read a story with this point of weiw. lik it, cintinue. :)
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Reviewed By: EvilleVonRandom [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, for a prologue, it's quite good. I never thought of what Vegeta's father would think of him as years passed by, even though the king was already dead. You came up with a good idea! Oh well, I hope the next chapter comes up!
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