| "Duo 401" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Shella-lady On: September 03, 2003 07:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is quite the insightful bit of work. A bit short maybe, but it gets its point across so it's not so bad. Aside from a few spelling/grammar errors, the writing moves well & covers enough dialogue, description & action to piece everything together well. The situations & memories you choose to describe Duo's personality are interesting stories in themselves, but it's even better to see how they've shaped his character. Mucho cool stuff.
Cheers,
--Shella-lady |
Reviewed By: Moon_Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2002 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Everything was spelled correctly, but some of the words were the wrong ones for the context. Such as at one point I think you meant to type 'way' instead you typed 'was'. It took me a minute to grasp that. Other wise, I really am enjoying this story and the 1st person POV from Heero. I feel like I'm reading his personal diary.
~MF |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: May 04, 2002 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
More! More! Please? I like it very much so far. Continue please! |
