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| "Static" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: FFRG
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 10:23 CST
Comment/Review:
The summary should not have ellipses because there are no unfinished thoughts. Anyway, nice beginning of the story. I like your story-telling style, it's different and as for Sess's characterization. I'll say it's pretty good, though, I don't have much of a reference to go on. But as a story, it's being told quite well. As for Kohaku, wouldn't he question why/how he was revived/saved? Also, you should read over the chapter for extraneous words so the story will flow better. And as for the mother's small observation, that was quite something else. Very interesting and the ending is really good for this story. Nice job on writing this. =)
| Title: GWolf
Reviewed By: GWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 10:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Oddly disturbing :D
| Reviewed By: kytenluvinu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 03:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow that was great and so very sad. But Great.
| Reviewed By: fireofinuyashasNLI On: October 02, 2006 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa. That's kinda psycho. And sad. *TEAR* Poor Sesshoumaru...wah. Well, at least it was well-written, as is all your work. This was interesting, in a way...but I don't think I cope well with psycho-roundabout-angstyness. Oh well. Sucks for me. BYE!
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