Reviewed By: Crystal Lily On: July 09, 2002 02:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: This is very good but you need some help on the spelling and grammer, no offence. Anywayz, please write the next chapter soon! |