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Title: just a hater
Reviewed By: don't worry On: November 16, 2008 18:25 CST
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N IM PRETTY DAMN PROUD OF MY REVIEW 2 HAHAHAHAHAHAH WOOO EVIL LAUGH!!!! YA JA NE
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Title: just a hater
Reviewed By: don't worry On: November 16, 2008 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
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i personally hated it, everyone was so damn out of character the only reason i read all of it is caz i have a restless curisoity, u are not discriptive enough, for example 4 da multiple times that narku kidnaps her she always manages to escape eg. (she didn't know he was in da room when she yelled why me..yet still she went down da hall n still managed to get kaguras heart 4 her, ya kagome isn't exactly strong but she does have miko powers, when narku was rapeing her she could have burned him like she did before n her miko powers surface the most when she or a loved one is in danger, n this Reiken character which was suposedly powerfull only shows up after the trauma or situation has occured, n she claims her insticts would take over n help her..ehhh so where da hell was her guidance or powers, infact you made kagome weaker than she was when she was a miko, n if kagome knew that she still had her miko powers then i'm sure she would have walked around with a bow n arrow. yo diz story line pissed me off, 1) she weak 2) she always gets kidnapped and somehow frees herself 3) Kouga was also a suitor 4) when one is raped they need time to heal, they don't just jump into a realitionship 5) everyone was out of character, 6) if she had the power of fire n ice she could have fused them together...the fire would melt the ice to water using her miko powers to control the elements she could have heated the water ...water is made up of hydrogen n oxyen using the fire to heat and spin the hydrogen n oxygen inside the water could have made electricty....causing her to make an electric shield.... 7) why da hell would she kill the ruler of the silver fox village...for what reason he didn't rape her or hurt her she could have grown to love him 8) she didn't even trust her friends enough to see her in her new form yet still she accepts inuyahsa da way he is...ya ya 9) the time didn't flow the monk was injured 4 month after kagome was captured n kagome didn;t find them until 1 year 1 month and 3 weeks later yet still he healed 2 days after kagome left come onn if hes injured for a year reall edit you damn stories n make sure dey dam well flow 10) i overall just hated it all im going to say is it sucked the ideas could have gone somewhere however you were not descriptive enough, your ideas didn't flow, the characters were not portrayed corectly n it was an overally waste of effort but wateva we are all entittled to our own opinion n mine was just dat spelling & grammer--0 originallity/creativity--0 enjoyment factor---DAMN DAT'S WAY BELOW ZERO DAT KELVIN 0...ABSOLUTE ZERO overall rating--just a sad sad bunny well ja ne
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i finally found it again :P hurray! you seem to jump all over the place in regards to just how much trouble she seems to get in. and Sai doesn't show up alot. Just where the heck does he go? You killed Shippou -.- Ryoko i can understand, we weren't really attached to her yet.... and she was kinda bitchy with her demands, but my god, you killed Shippou! at least it contributed to her madness ne?
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 09:25 CDT
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Can't wait to read more of this story!!! Please update soon!!!! What is the pairing going to be Kag/Sai?? or will Kagome die in the end with her final battle with Naraku????
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Title: malace and insanity...
Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
On the minus side: there were some instances where there were incorrect words, but I could still figure out what was intended. Plus side: very interesting how Kagome has to endure so much pain and suffering; I think it is a great illustration of how life really is but on a more intense level being that we, as people, cannot not turn into magically mythological demonic creatures that have all these extraordinary powers. It's also cool the way the characters seem to have to same personalties and characteristics that I felt they had when I watched the show but on an obviously much deeper level. The premise of Kagome having been tortured so much that she has gone completely insane yet still managing to realize that she has to overcome the state of mind is fascinating as well. I can't wait to see what's next!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 14:37 CDT
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yes, what to do what to do? *evil laugh* I still think this should turn out as an Inuyasha and Kagome fafic, but that's just my opinion, anyways. Great chapter! Hope to see Kagome . . . sane again! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 04:24 CDT
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OMG!! I am so happy to be back!!! I really like what you've done with this!! Kagome went crazy!!! That's SO like new! nobody has ever made her crazy before! I like it! It was sad how the kids died though.. and is Sai gonna came back?! or is he going to be a prejudice jerk about everything? OMG!!!! I am so excited!!!! Please hurry! I will be waiting! GOD bless you! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow, great update, that is so sad, Shippo, poor poor shippo, what is the final paring going to be? I think it shuld be Kags and yash, yeah, that would work! please update soon and have A Nice Day
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome injured naraku... was it the real one or just a puppet... then kagome met with the group again... they don't know about shippo being dead... really sad... seems that the path kagome follows is one full of pain, sorrow and loneliness... what is the final pairing?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... feel bad for kagome... is she doomed to be alone... eversince she became a fox a tragedy always follows her... will kagome really become insane... is sai out of the picture now or what... next chapter please... thank you... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 20:46 CST
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I love the story line! You are an awsome writer. I can't believe you had Ryoko and Shippo die though. I understand it but I don't belive it. And an Insane Kagome is a scary thing. Update soon please.
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Title: crazy kagome
Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 19:17 CST
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that should be interesting...i wonder just how crazy she will get?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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sad update... really bad shippo and ryoko died... guess shippo's foxfire wasn't much good or did he forget to use his fox magic... what will kagome do now... what about sai... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I have read the entire fanfic and I must say I quite enjoy what you have written. So are you planning on a Kagome/Sai mating or are you going to try and do a Inu/Kagome or Sessh/Kagome like you said in earlier chapters? I'm just wondering.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that kagome went to visit the others... sad that kirara died... hope miroku will recover... hope kagome will be able to control herself and her powers... can't say much for inuyasha... he's been out of the picture for quite some time now... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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