"Essential Elements" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: pinball62 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 18:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh my god! this story totally rocks! hopefully u will update more n soon. i love the idea behind the story, i think its really original. ur my inspiration lol!
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 04:00 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i really like this story. is it going to be updated again? it's really good! really original.
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Reviewed By: Hollow_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 18:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: you know this is a good story that i like a lot ............ plz start wrighting agien plz!!!!!
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Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 23:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg omgomgomg >__< this story is fantastic!! i haven't laughed/giggled/chortled/and outright cackled from a story in sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo loooooooooooooooooooooooong~!! thank you thank you for writing this! **glomp/pounce/hu~~gs** Duo's POV is just... .... i'm at a loss for words here. Direct? Dramatic? Hilarious!! And your choice of imagery is.. well.. that's what brings on the bouts of cackling~ and i just cannot be drinking anything while reading.. it... just.... wouldn't be fair to the laptop... **shakes head sadly** Wonderful. Please update soon~~ and please continue this story for as long as your muses can sustain it. It is.. In a long time, it is quite the enjoyable read~ I look forward to each update~ And the many 'almost' heart attacks of past, present and possible future. Tha~~~~~~~~nk You~~
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Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 02:48 CST Comment/Review: PLEASE! Come on! It's already the new year! Well just about. PLEASE! This really is way to good of a fic to just leave like this. And I know you get a notification whenever someone reveiws. So please! I'm begging here and I don't normally beg at all. Are you just trying to write the next few chapters and post them all at once or are you stuck? Please reply this time. rageofinferno@earthlink.net. Please tell me what's going on with this one. Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 11:51 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i LOVE this fic!!! its so funny
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Title: Ohhhh,..... I LIKE!!!! Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 09:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok the reason I gave you a 9 in the spelling grammer thing is cause I found a few little errors in that department. AND I FREAKING LOVE THIS FIC!!! Though I thought that you said you would update in a few weeks? It's already the middle of November. Please PLEASE PLEASE!!! Continue! It's just SO not fair to just leave it like that! I really wanna know WHY the G-boys were taken to this world and what problems they're gonna face in this place. Hey that rhymed! Sorry. Anyway... Are Heero and Duo gonna get together or what? And how about Trowa and Quat? Just curious. Please update soon! This is WAY to good of a fic to just leave it hanging like that. Please? Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: Raige [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is incredible so far! I commend you on everything in it! (I have to admit, I'm going to need to go back to the chapter where they met their demons and re-read it because i missed a few things.) This story is action-filled, but more importantly, it, so far, seems as though it's going to have a balanced mix of humour and seriousness. Happy and sad moments, which to me is one of the most important thing in a story. I look forward to reading more of this! *Runs off to go through the above mentioned chapter again*.
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Reviewed By: Lil_Shinni13 On: November 05, 2006 09:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoied this fic. I do hope that you continue to write more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bb On: October 12, 2006 21:24 CDT Comment/Review: I think I started reading this fic at another site and I have waited for over a year to read new chapters of this fic. I am glad I have not given up on this cuz it just one of those stories that I want to know the ending. Please update soon.
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Title: Essential Elements Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 22:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is cute! Intriguing. What other story does this cross over with? Or are these others your original characters? I look forward to reading more.
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Title: Essential Elements Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 22:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is cute! Intriguing. What other story does this cross over with? Or are these others your original characters? I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 00:08 CDT Comment/Review: omg I want to have more of this wonderfulness that is the story!!! this is really something to be proud of, and I hope you continue soon.
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