| "Art Class" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 11:32 CDT
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Are you sure this is your first Lemon? Or are you just saying that? it doesn't seem Like a first... Good work anyways!
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Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hot and yummy!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: February 11, 2007 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow...ahem...that was very tastefully done!!!
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Reviewed By: meganharu On: October 31, 2006 07:11 CST
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i thought this was suppose to be a one-shot? how come there's chapter 2? anyway, great story.
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's good
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Reviewed By: sulou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Kenshin isn't the only one blushing...haha. Yes I think you pulled that one off very well. Although I don't write fanfiction, I realize that writing a Lemon scene is not an easy task, but I think you've managed it well. Um, do I say "congratulations" now? Yeah, that and I look forward to more of your writing as well.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 19:29 CDT
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THAT WAS GREAT! THIS WAS YOUR FIRST LEMON? WELL IT DIDN'T SEEM LIKE THAT AT ALL!
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Reviewed By: nebulia On: October 04, 2006 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, before anything, I am a grammar Nazi, so the grammar really wasn't all that bad. However, there were a few comma/mechanics errors. The sex scene was good--it wasn't too sappy, thank goodness. The dirty talk was great. Other than that, for a first lemon, it was very well-done. Really. I loved the origianl premise, and you pulled off the kinky sex wonderfully. *g* I enjoyed it a lot.
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Reviewed By: sumpungin1308 On: October 04, 2006 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pakshet, ang galing mu! wehehe
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Reviewed By: Tobers On: October 03, 2006 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most enjoyable!! Cute story and very hot!
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