"Vampire and Demon Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 21:35 CST Comment/Review: Yeah, i guess that makes sense....*scratches head* in some weird swisty authory type way....i would offer to proof read your stuff, but i'm kinda busy, and i don't think you'd want me to do it anyway cuz i'ma procrastinator. But i love reading this fic! Please keep it up (even without the proofreading)!
| Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 21:32 CST Comment/Review: This is great! I can't wait for the next chapters! But, a suggestion? Pay attention to your tense. You switch back and forth between past and present, and it makes it a little choppy. But the images of Chris and Jamie were great! And i'm kinda confused about what's going on with Zal and Sean. Could you kinda clarify that a little for me please?
| Title: Fantastic! Five Stars! Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 20:51 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow, this story is incredible! How did you come up with the idea for this?! I absolutely love it! Please continue it.
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