Title: Shu Reviewed By:Shu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 13:57 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: To start let me say that you have too many misspelling for me but they are easy to understand and i am sure anyone with sense know what you meant i liked the way this turned out and the overall story it would better to me personally to make yaoi more detailed and longer than a bunch of them not that detailed it would be really cool if you continue i also like the way you had mokuba do seto but to tell you the truth besides that this was a average rated X fanfic but it did get me to comment so be proud of yourself usually reviews dont be worth my time or effort
