Title: AWWWW! Reviewed By:Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 10:19 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: AWWW! That was so CUTE! And hot. Though I do gotta ask.... what was that thing that gave them another chance? Kinda curious about that. And if I was Seph and had a wet, naked Cloud infront of me I would be reduced to a drooling pile of hormones. God am I glad I'm not male! PLease continue to write cool stories like this. Onegai?