| "Mr. Bubbles" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww thats so sweet. i like the ending.
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 03:38 CST
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This was a super-cute and very well-written story! Really loved how Inuyasha saw the bottle of bubbles and thought of Shippo--mainly because that's what I thought of the first time I saw Shippo. Great story!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 01:50 CST
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the January 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/january2007awards/Best-Oneshot-F ic-1st.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Jan2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our fifth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please note that each term we also look for volunteer artists to do the awards, like the one that you are receiving today, and we'd be delighted if you want to help out in that manner (or know someone who does). If you happen to be interested, please send the owner an email at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com stating your interest in helping draw the awards for the next term. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 14:56 CST
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Your story has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting continues through January 19th-20th, 2006. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Title: PIE
Reviewed By: xlawwendy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv pie!ur so good at doing this u should make more of inuyasha/kagome onshot thingy
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_girl_kagome2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI i loved your story cuz i love inuyasha and kagome with leamons. anyway your good at making story had to add to my fav. write more
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Title: glorious!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ChevyLuvr On: November 10, 2006 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glorious! rarely anymore do people write a fic that is romantic and yet sensual without making Kagome into a total whore. kudos, yo.
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Reviewed By: Leo818^.^ On: October 29, 2006 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really loved it. it was sexi and hot at the same time. i give a 100 more than a 10.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved it. Who would have ever thought that "Mr. Bubbles" could be so HOT! LOL. This was very sweet, sexy, and well-done. I hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Ti On: October 27, 2006 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love It!
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Reviewed By: Trillian42 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 22:08 CDT
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Really beautiful ~ very nicely written. Loved it. Just one small point: "he poisoned himself to make her his." I think you wanted to say "positioned," not "poisoned." Right?
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Title: Now we need a Rubby Ducky one..
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: October 08, 2006 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Boy!! Oh Boy!!! Oh wow!! My word that was some Hot!! I loved the way he was blushing over wanting to have some bubbles!! It was all really sweet, tender, hot and loving! Some Darn fine writing there!! I do have one question: "Between the mud flinging mud creature and the dirty imp the two were filthy." Was there two creatures they fought? An imp and a mud demon? Sorry but it has me rather confused. And I loved this line:"She wasn't psychic; anyone within a half mile heard the bickering coming from outside the well house." It is so true of those two!! You have captured their characteristics and personality beautifully! Kudos!! Thank you for the humour about the Maths.. It is so true. How do you explain that you need it? lol!! Great touch!! You thump the runt and eat the last one.. LOl!! Also a great line!! I can just imagine them being covered head to toe in mud with eyes and ears in Inuyasha's case just peeking out... I had a good laugh as well at Inuyasha's control to get his Ramen while he waitied. I appluad you! Very well written!! Cute!! Inuyasha wants to protect Jii-chan from possessed pottery!! giggles!! HAH!! Mama Higurashi doing what Mom's do best.. making sure their kids and loved ones get veggies into them. chuckles happily!! Bravo!! I do so love this one shot of yours!! Now we know Inuyasha's other crippling fear! That which strikes terror in his heart and makes him run!!! Souta!! and Curry!! LOL!! Love it!! Thank you!! I think you have captured Mama Higurashi perfectly as well!! Thank you!! You set the stage masterfully! Kagome does Inuyasha well... letting him have a Bubble Bath!! promptly grabs her Inuyasha plushie and huggles him... Squee!! This is great!! Have I mentioned that before? Cause it's true! I also laughed at Kagome's comment about Inuyasha opening his mouth and ruining her little daydream. You know I think that is one of my most favourite interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome is to have her wash his hair or to brush it out.. So I thank you as well for writing that out! I can see Kagome doing this.. going from washing his hair to his back to arms and then to other places. Considering the era she is from.. she would be more "aggressive" in the ways of intimacy. The way you have written the love scene and the scene leading up to it was masterfully and expertly well written! It wasn't just a slap the sex on the page with nothing to lead up to it and be done with it but a wonderful exploration and tenderness that many do lack! That in itself is hotter than the love making. It made it all that more memorable and delicious. I liked how Inuyasha wanted their first time not in the tub. Sweet. I loved the marking method you used! Very nice! Tattoos over their hearts. Sighs wistfully... Thank you for sharing this with us!! Please keep up the most awesome work! Can't wait to see more!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**applauds**...bravo Mr. Bubbles...bravo...**applauding more...** w00t!! :P
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Title: "his famous smirk"
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 23:24 CDT
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awesome bedtime reading! complete with tattos! well done.... ha. "mr. bubble"
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