| "In Present Company" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: Hiromaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Job, I know you wrote this story a long time ago. I must say, very good work. I mean, you captured the characters so well, especially about Kagome getting fed up with Inuyasha because of his imaturity. I would love to see the conclusion . . . I'm sure you have some great ideas about when Inuyasha figures out whats going on. Like I said, I know you wrote this a while ago but please continue the story . . .I suggest you finish up the chapters, and then 're-post' so that people can read the full story.
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Title: Unsurprisingly, I loved this too
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm starting to discover that you don't update things all that often, that's a shame. I've loved everything of yours that I've read so far, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I agree whole heartedly with snowbirdyokai. I hope you haven't abandoned it.
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I agree whole heartedly with snowbirdyokai. I hope you haven't abandoned it.
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Title: In Present Company
Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai On: February 16, 2008 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered this very delightful story. I like the personalities you've given Kagome and Sesshoumaru, especially Sesshoumaru. Some readers may think he's out of character, but not me. I've not read the manga, but in the anime, you have to watch his actions to get a hint at what he's thinking. More than once his actions have proven him to be an emotional youkai even if his expression is blank. I'm just disappointed that there's been no update since August. Have you abandoned this story? I hope not. Please come back to it and finish it.B
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 15:40 CDT
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eeeeh...so sweet....wait, your MOM likes this? I think my mom would kill me or at least demand I not show her my writing if she knew I was writing stuff like this! Anyway, write more because I really like what you have and I think it is about time you added another chapter
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 20:26 CDT
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wow that is just WOW , when will you be updateing ?
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 20:35 CDT
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AH haha! Your mom likes your lemons? Yikes, that would freak me out pretty much completely. I like your story, and despite the nagging sensation that Sess was somewhat OOC, I really enjoyed what you've done with him so far. I just liked him too much to even care!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe nsi On: August 08, 2007 12:09 CDT
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Hope you are still working on this story
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 20:31 CST
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I loved it looking forward to more...
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Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. A lot of people don't write a lot of good sess and kagome couple stories but u managed to pull it off excellently. I have to say I love this story. I really can't wait 2 see what you'll write next so updat soon k.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: hunter8844 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG im so in love with your story so far. I Can't wait for an update! Please Continue the story!
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: aeternitas812 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spell-binding. And I mean that litterally. I didn't do anything else until I finished reading all 9 chapters, despite being hungry and having to go to the bathroom most of that time. lol. Great story, very creative and original. Despite the obvious increase in Sesshomaru's personality, you manage to keep it believable and in character. Keep it up! Would love to read more. And I sympathize with you living nightmare exam since I just went through the same thing! Too bad it was a nightmare... O well. Keep up the good work. You are a very talented writer.
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Reviewed By: chicke [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story and can not wait for the rest!
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Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 12:12 CDT
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I really like this fic! You've developed Kagome and Sesshomaru so well and convincingly, not to mention kept consistent plot points and turns. Please update soon, so I can love this even more!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me wants moooore! :D This has potential to be a great fanfic! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 17:00 CDT
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Noooooo how could the chapters just end like that? *huddles in corner of the room and starts sobbing* ....Great story *cries harder* Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 20:57 CDT
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First off I love this story...especially the sess/kags stuff! Second, that real life side note sorta sounds like something that happened to me too, but I'm pretty sure it didn't end as well for me as it did you =(...oh well...please update!!
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Reviewed By: baybie_smt On: October 08, 2006 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i tink dis fanfic iz REALLI good....u shud keep on goin! itz realli interestin to read on how sesshoumaru iz actin wit kagome, so basically keep up da good work!!!o btw...good luck on ur exams!=P...update soon pleez=)
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Reviewed By: raven of the dark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is good... Please write the lemon soon!!! It was sooo intresting, keep up the good work and good luck for your exams. Smiile! =)
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Reviewed By: Kooris_Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 02:09 CDT
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not bad keep up your good work i can't wait to see what happens...
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