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"Dodger Huxley: Albel's First Apprentince" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ]
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2007 21:03 CDT
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O.o a game show? wow.... that's kinda original.... mind if i come on one time as a guest challenge? i'll give them all a challenge and like the catch the rabbit one, i'll give them 30 pts.... =p i'll im you the next time i'm online with details... XD nice chapt, funny too,
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2007 07:10 CDT
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huh.... guess i should actually play Star Ocean... i kinda wanna see if Albel is that much of an @$$... nice chapter though... kinda funny, but i can't really appreciate it in my alf asleep state..
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2007 12:28 CDT
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hm... i thought Albel would be tougher on Dodger... like actually using his blade, not his fist... oh well, so did dodger lose that pair of scythes i gave her, or is she just using them at "home"?
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2006 22:55 CST
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..... i don't think this chapter was necessary...... that's all i have to say right now....
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2006 17:05 CST
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wow, she's getting under his psychological armor.... and remind dodger that those spells i gave her are potentially deadly..... on second thought.... don't, she'll probably use Ion Strike on Albel....
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2006 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
wow.... i never expected cursing... but .... i guess i can relate to albel.... when people ask too many questions, it getts irritating.... especially if they are about painful things..... but i'm kinda depressed right now, so i think that infulenced my review.... and i'm starting to thing i'm a little bipolar...
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2006 06:23 CDT
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cool.... and funny..... and sickining at the same time..... still good... and why is albel so obsessed with apples? i mean i never played the game so i don't know what's up with that....
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 11, 2006 06:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg... funny!!!! and i snet you an email to your comcast.... read it and send me a reply@
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 10, 2006 05:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow.... albe is harsh.... maybe it's cecause he lost his bet? or is always like that.... i never finished playing Star Ocean, so i don't know....
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2006 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG That was sooooo funny.... but i kinda felt bad for Dodger when Albel stepped on her tail..... and when she started scrapping with him.... i wouldn't be suprised if one day they went out together.... =p
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 08, 2006 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
.... cool!!!!!! XD

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