| "Borrowed Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2010 20:26 CST
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Aww it's over :( Glad they got together in the end and Vegeta wished his victims back. Thanks for a great story :)
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 18:37 CST
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Really enjoying this story :) Vegeta is at last showing remorse for his past, hopefully it will help him. Wonder what he's going to do on New Namek? Goku also has come to some sort of reconcilliation with what happened, and I'm eager to read what he will do next.
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Reviewed By: Sun12 On: November 11, 2007 17:36 CST
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I love it and I need more now!!!
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Reviewed By: PurinsuArashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^! this is awesome. It is very sad you're not doing a Mpreg with this one. I'm sure you'd do great! You said you need to work on your lemons(?) and such, so I understand, however as a suggestion would be a Second story, in line with this one or another much like it ^_^! So far you have all the best working in line for one. Like I said, I'm sure you would do great! Please continue with this story! Great! GREAT! I love it, even if you have decided not to do mpreg. Great relationship story! ^_^! Please, please, please! PLEASE update soon! Thank you for sharing this with us! =#=Storm=#=
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Reviewed By: severusslave On: November 27, 2006 16:38 CST
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*wants more*
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Reviewed By: Kahlan N On: November 25, 2006 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey! I was looking for a good story and you have certainly delivered! I would've preferred the romance part a little...later, as kissing was not needed to transmit the disease. Trunks said the disease spread all across Earth before an antidote was found. Anyways I like everyone's assumption that Vegeta took it purposely, but I think at least Piccolo would listen if Vegeta tried to explain. :P I look foward to more!
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Title: Borrowed Redemption
Reviewed By: Yuurei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far. I love the idea of having Goku think Trunks was his and Vegeta's. Very original and I really like the direction this fic is going. Keep going and update again soon please.
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Reviewed By: Vole [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *love* your stories, and this is one of the most creative I've seen so far, from you or anyone else. So far this is good to the point of... I don't know what. Being really good? The writing is a little choppy, so I hope you go a little further into the story in the next chapter, but I still love it. Anyways, keep it up! Can't wait for the next chappie! (PS. I kinda hope it doesn't turn out mpreg... Those *tend* to turn out kind of... Mleh. Anyways. Maybe *you* could pull it off, but I still think it's better without it.)
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Title: Borrowed Redemption
Reviewed By: BlueEye On: October 11, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is grate and funny only Goku would make a mastic like that. I agree with CrimsonSin it should be Mpreg and Vegeta the pregnant one any update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Borrowed Redemption: Vegeta, can guys have babies
Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: October 11, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I hope that it truns out to be a Mpreg and Vegeta is the uke and the one who is having the baby. keep on writing and update soon.
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