| "Black and Blue Princes of Point Place" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: plum48 On: May 19, 2009 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY G0D. i can't believe that some one would have the nerve to do that to jackie. what does pam even see in that man?! probably just dating him for his good looks. where is pam? poor jackie, she can't even face her friends. john is such a dick head. will the guys find out? what will they think if they do? will hyde be the first to know what is happening to jackie? what will he do about it? what if kitty and red find out? or even pam, bob, and midge? i have so many questions and the only was to answer my list of questions is if you keep on writing. i don't want to keep waiting any longer. i really love your story. so please up date A.S.A.H.P. (as soon as humanly possible) I NEED TO KNOW NNNNNOOOOOOWWWW!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yrael On: July 17, 2007 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only sad that I couldn't rate everything at 0. Holy shit. Learn English, please.
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Reviewed By: inuearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 02:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it ^^ though I think u should make ur chapters longer
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Reviewed By: ElliesDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: busheybrow1113 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a great story i feal so bad jackie please up date plwees
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Reviewed By: vengeful_vixen8613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 21:37 CST
Comment/Review:
decent so far keep up the good work.
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