| "Pride" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 12:14 CST
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i'm glad you added more to ur chappie. although i do have to reread cause i forgot what some of the story was about. i kind of wish there was more about Inuyasha's childhood and how Sesshy was toward him. i found that part interesting.
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Title: bout time
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I mean nothin rude about my title. just was waiting for another chapter. This good plz tell me your going to write more. this is going to be a good story and ya know it. now plz make with the more updates. you already have people hooked plus alot of us have been waiting for you to come up with something new. so plz update.
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Title: awww!
Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 01:56 CDT
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that was such a sweet chappie. the thought of sesshy doing something nice for his brother is so kawai! like always i can't wait to see more, and see how inuyasha takes it when he finds out that sesshy isn't his father. that is, if u decide to showcase that. can't wait till u update. ttfn. :)
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Title: Neat
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 14:30 CDT
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This has some potiental. Hope to see more soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh! me likey this chappie. i hope u continue. i'm lovin it. i still can't wait to see how link the past with the present. oh, i just wanna hug the lil Inu pup and cradle him. LOL. :}
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 09:53 CDT
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i really enjoyed this chappie. and like always, i like where u seem to be going with sesshoumaru's character. i'm really intruigued to see how u go from this part of the story to the present situation in the story (anime/manga). plus, i love the names for the two characters. i wonder if we'll see Rei again. great start. i hope u continue. maybe do a summary for ur next chappie, if and when u post it. :)
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always your fics have me wanting more. I cant wait for your update.
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 18:24 CDT
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interesting start to a new fic. i'm eager to see what you plan to do with this fic, if u decide to continue it. i give it two thumbs up. it really makes ya think. :} ~~~huggles~~~
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