| "Unknowing to You" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Anime1girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 19:36 CDT
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I really like the story. I don't know how i like the story i just do.
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Reviewed By: MadxForxYaoi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 04:13 CDT
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OH MY GOD! I LOVE YOU! *hugs and kisses* Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I loved this story so much! It was one of the best I've ever read! I'm not just saying this as flattery. It's the honest to god truth! This story was the perfect combination a little drama mixed in with romance. And to top it all off: So orignal! I have never read a story where Inuyasha gave birth that way or turned into a dog. Neither have I read a story where Sesshomaru and Inuyasha weren't together for the first pregnancy. And usually the only have one or two kids. Four and then more on the way later?! Very very very creative and well written! Congratulations on a wonderful story. Job well done. *hugs more* You are awesome!P.S. Sorry for the lengthy, rambling review, but you so deserved this much, and more praise for this brilliant peace of work.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 03:53 CST
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I enjoyed reading your story. I'm always a sucker for a happy ending and it was nice to read a S/I that wasn't pure angst! I do have one bit of constructive criticism, though. In chapter one you use the word "menstruations" (which refers to a woman's monthly menstrual cycle) two or three times. I believe the word you meant to use is "ministrations." You have great ideas here and an easy-to-read style. I hope you'll continue to post!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very cute story!! I loved it. ^_^ I love yaoi stories with Sesshomaru/Inuyasha in them. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more writings from you in the future!
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Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW! SO KAWAII!!!! Not many people would actually think of turning InuYasha into a dog for an easier birth. Though I do have to admit that Sesshoumaru admitted his feelings REALLY easy. I thought that there would be more of a battle with that. But all in all I really enjoyed this story. Arie Date.
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Title: Very Very NICE
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I'm the first to review! This was a very sexy story! I really love the birth scene, it was very inventive! I haven't read any other Inu births were Inu actually turns into a dog. Kudos to you on a job well done! I'll be adding you to my favorites list, and I hope to read more stories from you!~B reading U!
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