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| "Playing With Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: -falls on floor in shock-
Reviewed By: silver_Sesshomaru_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you made hie the evil dominator who took out his wants on the unexpecting young girl Boton. It gives a new meaning to the evil wants within Hiei's heart and the desires that Boton hides.Out of all stories, it is a great one shot of heated anger towards the insulted man who proves the woman wrong. Continue writing like this and you will be sure to have fans running to the computers to read. However, I do warn you. The next time you envolve things such as 'kitchen sex' remember one thing. It is always best when they unwantingly get a partner in the mix. Overall, the smut, the lemon, I am suprised teh story was not banned to be read.Good job.Oh, and Excuse all my mistakes. >
| Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 15:54 CST
Comment/Review:
love love loved it. it was very good hiei is so sexy!!
| Title: great
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It's humorous and definitely very enjoyable.
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