| "It's Cold!" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: MOG I LOVE DIS STORY!!! On: April 13, 2007 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i'm not going to do the challenge...but i just love dis' Fanfic!!!It's got everything-an extra "chat" section in the end,excellent pairing,and best of all-INNER THOUGHTS!!!I love the inner conflicts. I thought that it was good that sasuke smiled for once.O_O. kinda wierd though.PLEASE UPDATE WHEN THE CHALLENGE IS DONE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that's one of the best fanfics I've ever read, just amazing, I loughed like crazy ^^ It's hard to decide what I liked best due to the fact that it's so great. I don't have any Ideas for the story, unimaginatively me... Not beein a writer myself I have no idea how many chapters the story could possibly have in the end, but considering how much I enjoyed it up to this point there can't be enough *g*
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 12:18 CST
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1: What, as the reader, do you think should happen next? As a reader I reader I think Sakura and Hinita's parrents should come out looking for them because they are worried that they didn't come back at the specified time they said they would return and they catch their children the "act". 2: What were you're favorite and least favorite parts of this story so far? (a)My favorite part in the story is when cach charater expresses their feeling for each other, and the mini stories you always have at the end. (b)To be honest I couldent find any faults in the story 3: How long do you think this story could potentially last for? 10, 20, 30+ chapters?? I think it should be 20...25 chapters tops then should start working on a sequal. Because if you start a new one people will be drawn to it, but before they could read it they would have to read you first to understand story giving you more reviews for both of them. 4: Do you have any ideas that you think would be really good for the story? (1)Naruto, Hinata, Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi, and Kurenai meet up in a near by village. (2)Hinata's farther catches her and Naruto in the act while in a mission in the village their in. 5: Dose anyone think that the current status of the story is good enough to leave it as completed, and if so, do you think that there should be a sequel?Like I said before go aa little further then make a sequal.
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Reviewed By: natsumi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1: What, as the reader, do you think should happen next? o__o That... is what I should be asking YOU =] [or another twist to the story =D *would because once you do the writing will take a downfall; usually does. 4: Do you have any ideas that you think would be really good for the story? Something that'll happen in village but something went wrong >.> -dunno what- and they have to come back to the caves -winkwink- haha xD 5: Dose anyone think that the current status of the story is good enough to leave it as completed, and if so, do you think that there should be a sequel? o__o either is fine x) I'll favorite it either way. Although if their is a Sequel then more people will be able to see the story; like I look at the newest stories. ----
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Reviewed By: randombugger On: December 20, 2006 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Naruto thought Sasuke was gay, can't really blame him, and they all have inner pervs. Sweet! It's always amuseing when people argue with themselves. BTW it's: "wheather or not" not "weather or not", weather only refers to clouds, rain and such. Uh, how did Sasuke go back to Konoha? Intresting way to lose your virginity, slip and impale yourself. What is their mission any ways? and just what is Hinata's father's reaction when he hears about this? un Kakashi does have one scar on his face the one over his left eye. how is it that they're even awake and moving around by noon? some segestions: keep the story going at least through the current mission and the return to konoha. have at least a little violence in it. put some more back story in it, say a flashback to when sasuke came back to konoha. maybe the girls families reaction when they come home and...what ever happens.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Xand Dagger On: November 24, 2006 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really great, i hope you are continuing the story considering it saying a work in progress. Keep it up, you got talent.
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Title: girl who likes fanfics
Reviewed By: GirlWhoLovesYourStory On: November 21, 2006 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so freaking awsome i couldnt stop reading! you are very talented and i cant wait to read your other stories! thank you, i am so happy that other people apricate the fact that Naruto and Hinata and Sakura and Sasuke belong together!! again keep up the great work! you have yourself a new 'fan'! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 17:43 CDT
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That was great I really like how you had Sasuke say that he isn't a perv...but his gender is.
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Reviewed By: inumeru On: October 23, 2006 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for writing this story i really enjoyed it though you did misspell some words but thats ok you also called the third lord hokage a she when he is a guy. other than that it was great.
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Title: Its me again
Reviewed By: Death Fan Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 01:51 CDT
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Very Good. I like the kunoichi seal thing. it means they can get on all night long and not worry about pregnency, right? And you have got to have the Kakashi/Kuranae scene already! Im dying with anticipation! Chap 5 is really good by the way. I love the Kirby dance.
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Title: enjoyable
Reviewed By: gau ban [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very enjoyable story with a bit of everything pretty funny to.
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Title: -shake my fist harder-
Reviewed By: Kiraichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no you don't!! The story was just getting extra good and romantic and loving and you stop right there!!!!!!! Keep going!! That was awesome come on!!! You are a great wrutter so use that incredible skill to continue the story! T _ T
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Title: Im not stupid!
Reviewed By: Death Fan Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 22:34 CDT
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I knew it said hentai! If you look at all the other stories a whole bunch of them say hentai only because one the characters walks in on the other characters in the bathroom or somethin okay? Still, you did great on the chapter. Are Kurenae and Kakashi gonna get it on? Just wanderin.
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Reviewed By: V-townlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i have to say is WOW!!
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Title: Cool Story
Reviewed By: Death Fan Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story but i waas just wanderin it might turn hentai or somethin, you know, with Narutos hardon and Sakuras chest practically smashed into Sasukes face and kurenai being naked and Kakashi teasing because shes cute when shes mad. Not that it would be bad if it didntbut still i think it would cool if it did. Good work so far! Keep it up!
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