"The Protector of Her Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: gillster On: March 22, 2007 21:23 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well, we know Kagome wants Inuyasha and he wants her=] i mean the girl cries for him! Well anyway please update sooner than last time=]
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Reviewed By: evloner On: February 25, 2007 14:34 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story I hope you update soon. Even though I think I know how the story will end, you got me on the edge of my seat. Hey why doesn't inuysha know that naraku is Lord Onigumo? Didn't you say earlier that even in a disguise that a demon can still discern who you are by scent alone? FANTASTIC STORY PLEASE CONTINUE.
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Reviewed By: evloner On: February 25, 2007 14:30 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: gillster On: February 23, 2007 22:45 CST Comment/Review: not bad...u made me cry...nice job....updatesoon
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 21:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story of yours is tearing me apart. I mean really there has to be a way for them to be together and the only way for that to happen is if they runaway to the Midlands. Anyway I really like this story and I really hope you update. Peace.
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Title: nooooo! Reviewed By: Cherryblossombabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 21:15 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Kagome can't marry naraku!!!! he's disgusting lol...poor inuyasha and kagome their time together was sooo short too, plzze update soon i can't wait to see wut happens
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_must_die2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 13:41 CST Comment/Review: OMG! The end was so sad! I hope in the end she can live in the midlands. Even though Kagome and Inuyasha do not know a way for that to happen I do! Inuyasha said that both kingdoms would want someone from their kingdom ruling the midlands. So, what if Kagome and Inuyasha ruled it together? Inuyasha= Demon Kingdom, Kagome= Human Kingdom, and Souta could rule the Human kingdom in Kagome's place.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 06:39 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That is sad, I mean there has to be a way, anyway, those two could be togather. And Inuyasha being a prince and all didn't help much. Maybe the Queen can get the council to change the rules a little? Or maybe Kagome can go with the plan of running away with her man and stay in the Midlands. Well I just hope that this story would end well and not all tragic like. So update and keep it up. Peace.
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Title: protector of her heart Reviewed By: Gillster On: February 11, 2007 20:00 CST Comment/Review: i am so pissed that they can't be together.I think they should both run away and get married. At the end of the last chapter i almost cried.WOW i never cry unless some dies in my family.Well the story coming out great,please update!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: cookie_monster On: February 11, 2007 04:56 CST Comment/Review: WAAAAAAAAHHH...poor people. UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Gillster On: February 01, 2007 17:21 CST Comment/Review: what's taking so long? update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 06:09 CST Comment/Review: woah...i just read over what i wrote and i ment to say that i think inuyasha should't fall back in love with kikyo...my bad...well UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 06:07 CST Comment/Review: o man....that was soooo good....they finally kissed....i was waiting for that moment....now are they going to talk about what happened between them or are they just going to act like it never happened???.....and is kagome going to find out how inuyasha really knows kikyo???....i also think that u should have inuyasha fall back in love with kikyo....not that i dont like her....but hey its your story!...man there are sooo many questions i want answered!!!....keep up with the great work and UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: the new world Reviewed By: Gillster On: January 30, 2007 20:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wait they can't be together?! whats with that? if they want to be together then let them.i think they should.i mean if u were in love i don't think anything would stop u.am i right? any way is inuyasha going to meet kikyo again?plese don't make him fall in love with her again. I HATE HER SO MUCH!bitch. plese update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 06:09 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wait, wait, wait, isn't it ok for them to be together, I mean sure Inuyasha is a knight but he is also a prince. So its ok for them to be together, he maybe a knight but hes still a price and plus that will solve the problem of Kagome's marriage thing. And Inuyasha is rich, right? So he can make the biggest amount. Well I hope that will work, so anyways great chapter and hope you update soon. Peace.
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