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| "The Pitfalls of Being Pretty" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: November 02, 2006 06:03 CST
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This was unexpected but it fit them perfectly, and I loved it. To tell the truth, from its genres I was scared to open it, but the summary was cute so I tried it, and am overjoyed I did. Thanks for writing and sharing ^__^
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 12:20 CST
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umm...yeah. You paint pictures in my brain far too well. You're a fantastic writer, RQ. *goes to look at pretty pictures of not-bleedong hot boys*
| Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 21:24 CDT
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Have I mentioned how much I love you lately, RQ? This was fabulous as per usual. Farf's berserk mode is an unstoppable force of nature. Love that he's getting both neater and more creative at the same time.
| Reviewed By: kinukitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 22:17 CDT
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Ah, that left me with a smile on my face. The documentary on meercats is my favorite part - LOVE meercats. Also Aya's reaction to the crime scene, and that his reaction, after having the victim's blood smeared on his lips, was horny and slightly irritated. And Aya hugging the dogs on the way out. Sweet. BTW, I want to thank you for your reviews of my stuff . Very much. And I'm looking forward to reading the Sous Chef - it looks great.
| Reviewed By: Andartha^_^ On: October 19, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most stories end with "...and they lived happily ever after" and this one does too....kinda. It's not one of those sugar-coated ever-afters where everything is perfect. It's an ever-after with a price tag which fits Farf and Aya just fine. Thanks for writing/posting this, I enjoyed it immensely, best wishes, Anda
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