| "Shattered Ice Redux" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Finally finished!
Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I finally got to finish this fic. I was in college when I started to read this fic and had to drop reading it when homework got too crazy. For the longest time, I forgot about this fic. Then I got an alert. It wasn't even from this fic but it made me remember it. I also got a blackberry, on a whim, I tried coming to mediaminer and it worked! I've been reading this fic every spare moment that I had. I started reading the older fic too and I have to say I like this one better. It was a great improvement. :) I started Shattered Dreams and I'm about 20 chps in. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Chap 1 Review
Reviewed By: Kilisan On: February 27, 2008 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so my ratings may be biased but seriously it is good so far and I am intrigued. There was a little bit of funky wording but no where near as bad as I get, lol. Hmm...Cloud is a big fat whiny (spelling?) baby! He's all, "I'm the leader and you have to listen to me dammit!" I can totally see him throwing a temper tantrum. As for everyone else....I was thinking it odd that Aeris or Tifa did not try to impose themeselves on Cloud when they split up. I admit that I cocked my head to the side in wonderment of the pairings that left together. It was a little unexpected but, I guess you need to have unexpected things. lol and whats up with Nanaki not liking the big boobed ho bag hanging off of his fur? I thought that was especially funny..... Meh, anyways, I decided to start reading this because I could not remember if I had already done so or not. So far so good and you know you will have to keep me interested for this fic. I'm not exactly a HUGE ff7 buff, lol. *cough*Neverfinishedthegame*Cough*
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Title: i dont know if it worked..so here is the same post again
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 05:33 CDT
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amazing you have made this story even better!! i love everything you have added the Reeve and Reno implications and parts are wonderful! i love it!! the added Cid and Vincent moments (like when cloud stopped being a vegetable and they sat against a tree talking I love that part >.
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Title: Simply Amazing
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing you have made this story even better!! i love everything you have added the Reeve and Reno implications and parts are wonderful! i love it!! the added Cid and Vincent moments (like when cloud stopped being a vegetable and they sat against a tree talking I love that part >.
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Reviewed By: kuro fenikkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 15:20 CDT
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Alright, i wanted to finish the current chapters befroe commenting, so here i go. Your originl story was incredible. It's hard to maintaine a good plotline when your turning the things you did AU. However, i believe that this story far outstrips the last with creativity and how you explaned certain events. I really enjoyed this revamped version. but you could've done without the whole 'give me a number' part.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 13:23 CDT
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Sorry I haven't been able to keep up. College and alot of stuff that happened irl has kept me from reading all the fics I love. But now I'm back and I should be able to try to catch up, lol. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (never logged in) On: March 03, 2007 09:39 CST
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I really do adore this revamped version. I loved the first version but this one is so much better.
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Title: so cool
Reviewed By: CatNeko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh please write more!its so cool!
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 14:46 CST
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This chapter was really exciting, more so than its counter part in the previous story. I have to say this is one of my favorite chapters to date. Its cool you're making Cloud kind of your own character. I think he'll turn out just fine.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:36 CST
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Not bad. Compared to the chapter in your first fic, this was alot smoother. But one question. Why do you put @#$% and stuff when throughout the rest of the fic you put straight up swear words. I just don't think it makes sense.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 02:12 CST
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Did mediaminer cut off my review?! WTF?! D:
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 02:11 CST
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I love it when authors take time to read our reviews.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 12:33 CST
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O_O I wonder what that flare is.. I think I'm addicted to this story. And you seem to update regularly. I think I'll find the original and read that too. ^-^ Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: margyy On: December 04, 2006 00:31 CST
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Great job on this chapter!! I really loved how you added the part with Reeves showing up ^^ You seem to be showing more of Reeves and Cids friendship, which you didn't in the original version, but I like that you are!! Can't wait till the next update!
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 03:31 CST
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I don't know if its an improvement, since I haven't read the original, but I did enjoy the first chapter very much. Makes me wonder where this story is going to go.
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