Reviewed By:ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 16:49 CST Comment/Review: I adore the added detail. You've really made the entire storyline much tighter. Your Vincent POV has gotten better as well. Great work.
Reviewed By:Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 20:50 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I like. But this doesn't seem to be the end. It feels like a cliff hanger. An evil one at that. So what's goin' on? Will Vincent and Cid get together or what? And what's up with the shaking planet? I think that this is just a starting point for this fic so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Arie Date.