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Title: nice =]
Reviewed By: pinkXmiko23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was hawt *noose bledd* lol i think it was a bit short but very good way 2 go
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Title: horny
Reviewed By: goanna On: September 03, 2007 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
it made me only an eensy bit horny ...k....brush up on ur skillz....im a writer mself .....i can write better than u....
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Reviewed By: iheartkyontohru On: July 16, 2007 23:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it a lot. it was cute and the strawberries were a nice touch. one thing though, howcome kyo didnt turn into a cat when tohru hugged him? you might want to clear that matter up for us.
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 13:30 CST
Comment/Review:
... why didn't kyo turn into a cat each time she hugged him?¿ confusing @_@
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Title: [Insert Title Here]
Reviewed By: Hachi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I enjoyed your story. I was slightly confused there for awhile about Kyo not transforming, but then after you explained that you wanted to add the fact that Tohru broke the curse somehow, but couldn't figure out how to put it in the story, it made more sense. Thanks for the good read ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Kenzie On: October 29, 2006 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story. It was very intresting to read. i love fruits basket and this was very different. i loved it.
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: bugaboo107 On: October 27, 2006 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely great! I think you did a great job characterizing Tohru, and Kyo (impulsive). Fun and well-written, love the idea of the picnic. FOOD, I love the idea of strawberries (I actually used that before for my fanfict for Hatori and Tohru), aren't they romantic??? ***Isn't interesting how people always "I love you" when having S-E-X? Well-written lemon for your first time, even if the story was short. It was great! (however, I like stories that build up to a climax, maybe discuss their relationship. Slow, churning love is the best! Shigure is such a cute and funny character! (one of my favs after Hatori!) Continue writting, you are a great author!!! Yi-pee! I hope to read more of your work!!!
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Title: Wodernflu!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you i give five high. i give you a high five. that was very pretty. but i have a tiny complaint. when somone from the opposit sex hugs kyo he turns into a cat
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