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Reviewed By: LadyWolfRideroftheForest On: October 03, 2007 23:39 EDT
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it is very sweet!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 10:19 EDT
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This was fun, i like your Inuyasha in Kagome's world experiences, that was one of my fav bits in 'mating season' too XD You present it very nicely, its all so cute ^_^ -- shigure-san
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 13:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story, especially the first two chapters. I thought the costume party was a nice idea, giving IY the opportunity to go out like a normal person and hang out with Kagome's friends. I'm sure it's been done before, but I love how you wrote it. I particularly liked the "only woman he ever loved" bit, which was very romantic. The lemon was well-written, too. I look forward to reading more stuff by you.
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Title: I expected as much
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 09:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you've done it again another kickass inuyasha and kagome fic.I would expect no less from a genious like you.err.. um I kinda had this idea for a fic were sesshomuru had liked Izaoi and Inuyasha and taught him stuff when his father died.But Inuyasha still gets pined to the god tree.You think it any good.Your really good with Inuyasha fics just thought I'd ask.If you'll respond just write it in your next chapter I'm gouna be reading it any way. Later
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Reviewed By: jrforever On: October 27, 2006 01:54 EDT
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Aww! That was really sweet! I loved it! Was that the end or is there more? Personally I hope that there is more. This is a really good fic. You have done a really good job!
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Title: Let's Party
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 17:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Halloween story is so cute. Inu gets a night out with Kagome where he can be himself. Inuyasha just took the cans of soda out of hobo's hand funny. I mean how dense can you be not to see that they were together!lol I really love the party. He open her can for her such a simply thing but to a girl it's everything ( oh! the romance). I have to say that my favorite line is "I never said Kikyo was the only women I ever Loved, I said she was the first." See it thing like that you do that make your fic's so good. I don't think that I really told you that you have such a gift for the small little action and lines that just make girl want to keep reading you. it just helps that you are a great writer that we get to read it. I know for a fact that's what make Mating Season so wonderful for me atleast. The simply times alone. It's kinda of funny cause I don't think you notice that you do it. "Life was about having fun, and to live while we are alive." I'll never forget that. Shivonne Keep doing what you do best. "You can shine no matter who you are." can you guess were that line is from?
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 10:14 EDT
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this is sweet. great job.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 08:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic reminds me of why I have you on my favorites list. Great story. Well written with the exception of a misspelled word. (Squoze?) My favorite line is when Inuyasha reminds her that he said that Kikyo was his first love. I am very glad that someone else caught that from that episode of the manga. Keep up the great work. Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 23:07 EDT
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Oh that was so absolutely passionate and tender. I don't think one could ask for more beautiful confessions of love. I worry for them though. There's nothing worse than someone losing a loved one. I really enjoyed the chapter and look forward to more updates. Thanks bunches!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 21:32 EDT
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This was a really fun read. I liked that Inu's story was told as a 'ghost story.' Lots of fun. I also liked the lemon. In so many lemons, people fail to take into account that Kagome has been riding a bike or on Inu's back for years (and modern use of tampons) so her hymen really didn't stand a chance. Thanks for writing for us! Happy Halloween
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: October 21, 2006 15:06 EDT
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so sweet! i loved how you worked in tales of their adventures as horror stories. and the candy corn in poor inu's ear. at least kagome rubbed it and made it better. i like how this one ended...with both of them choosing to live life as it comes.
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Reviewed By: Hiei and the Cherry On: October 20, 2006 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cute! and utterly awesome! keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Shiva_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I seriously love it! I am a big fan of your writing and it just keeps getting better and better. Your lemons are awesome, no way in hell could I write something like that. Hell, I'm still in School. I hope to read some more of your great stories. Ja ne. Shiva ^_^
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