| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: go wit hinata
Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 09:16 CST
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come on man i am a naru/hina supporter i dont know how to make private messages... NARU/HINA
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Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rolls around while laughing and trying to plug nose* Excellent! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 09:18 CST
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funny..... and weird...... are you ever going to tell people in a chapter what happened to him? i'm guessing not..... well, if you do, i'm betting it is going ot be very very... odd? yeah.... odd....
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did like you to continue wit Hinata, but... I dont like it when you stole Hinata's innocence away...oh well...Sorry..
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story it is funny and you asking about ideas with the next girl hell are couple of them I wouldn`t mind seeing in this story they are Anko,Kurenai,Tenten,Shizune,Temari and Sakura and most of all Hinata again her and Ino I think if you made a chapter with either Anko or Temari it might end up being funny well thats just my opinion anyway keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha! damn it i will just say this now i think im a pervert because i was pissed when u had it stopeed at wat u did because i found myself wanting to read how they would go at "it" if u know wat i mean...*smiles evily*...well other than that its ok but make more naru/hina or else...*laughs from the joke*
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:43 CDT
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That chapter was da bomb!! But Kami!! Kakashi! Why did you have to ruin the moment of Hinata and Naruto's moment of unintentional doodle-making!! And, I'm still lmao over Naruto's thought of making doodles with Hinata in a blow of ramen! HA!! That is a new classic there! Love the story!! I cannot wait to read what happens next! I also wonder what would happen if Naruto and Hinata found the video . . . Kami, what could happen then? I just want to know what is going to happen next!! Till next time, toratsume p.s. God . . . doodles, ronflmfao!!!
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG GAI IS A PERVERT! LOL! This story is so fucking funny...
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 14:39 CDT
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That was an awesome chapter. Poor Naruto . . . being set up by his own senseis!!! I can only Imagine what is going to happen next!!! I cannot wait until the next chapter!! What is Hinata going to do or even say to Naruto!! What is going to happen! I'm literally on the edge of my seat here! Please, please, please, update asap!!
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Reviewed By: Colt 45 On: October 22, 2006 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet story
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Reviewed By: Doodle fun On: October 22, 2006 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe ish good meh like da story veryvery much ^^
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Reviewed By: Ino-chan On: October 22, 2006 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! Right after I reviewed I noticed this chapter (2) was up. ESP! That was awesome! I loved it so much!!! It was so hilarious. I loved Ino, and I really hope we'll be seeing more of her in this fic. I loved this chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ino-chan On: October 22, 2006 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is awesome! It would be really funny if you had Ino accost Naruto. Ino's so forceful... and I just love Naruino! Or there could be some Ino/Sakura competition for Naruto's affections... that could get pretty hilarious too. I love it so far! Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: toratsume(not logged in) On: October 22, 2006 09:00 CDT
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OMG!! That was freaking funny!! I cannot wait until you update again!
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 21:19 CDT
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Keep writing or I'll KILL YOU
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