| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha! damn it i will just say this now i think im a pervert because i was pissed when u had it stopeed at wat u did because i found myself wanting to read how they would go at "it" if u know wat i mean...*smiles evily*...well other than that its ok but make more naru/hina or else...*laughs from the joke*
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:43 CDT
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That chapter was da bomb!! But Kami!! Kakashi! Why did you have to ruin the moment of Hinata and Naruto's moment of unintentional doodle-making!! And, I'm still lmao over Naruto's thought of making doodles with Hinata in a blow of ramen! HA!! That is a new classic there! Love the story!! I cannot wait to read what happens next! I also wonder what would happen if Naruto and Hinata found the video . . . Kami, what could happen then? I just want to know what is going to happen next!! Till next time, toratsume p.s. God . . . doodles, ronflmfao!!!
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG GAI IS A PERVERT! LOL! This story is so fucking funny...
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 14:39 CDT
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That was an awesome chapter. Poor Naruto . . . being set up by his own senseis!!! I can only Imagine what is going to happen next!!! I cannot wait until the next chapter!! What is Hinata going to do or even say to Naruto!! What is going to happen! I'm literally on the edge of my seat here! Please, please, please, update asap!!
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Reviewed By: Colt 45 On: October 22, 2006 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet story
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Reviewed By: Doodle fun On: October 22, 2006 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe ish good meh like da story veryvery much ^^
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Reviewed By: Ino-chan On: October 22, 2006 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! Right after I reviewed I noticed this chapter (2) was up. ESP! That was awesome! I loved it so much!!! It was so hilarious. I loved Ino, and I really hope we'll be seeing more of her in this fic. I loved this chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ino-chan On: October 22, 2006 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is awesome! It would be really funny if you had Ino accost Naruto. Ino's so forceful... and I just love Naruino! Or there could be some Ino/Sakura competition for Naruto's affections... that could get pretty hilarious too. I love it so far! Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: toratsume(not logged in) On: October 22, 2006 09:00 CDT
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OMG!! That was freaking funny!! I cannot wait until you update again!
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 21:19 CDT
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Keep writing or I'll KILL YOU
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Reviewed By: Doodle fun..... On: October 21, 2006 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it no wait I don't like it.................I LOVE IT!!!!XD it's so freakin awsome! hehehe I can't wait till you update soOoOoOo update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 08:47 CDT
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I really thought this story is funny and I would love to see more chapters so please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great especially when they kept pissing Naruto off with 'doodles' lol. Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your making one that sound familiar only the auraa wheres off when hes not around and he looks different in the other and in this it affects every woman but this is still funny keep up the good work and try to make it naru/hina i love that pairing and if u do better u could get a better rating from me.
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Reviewed By: Cail [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way this is looking. Keep on writing.
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