Reviewed By: Benatar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 17:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, this was a pretty good yaoi fanfic. It was intriguing how it was built up to the moment where Kai and Tala kiss. You kept the yoai nice and smooth and rather light. I like that. I can't stand buttsex yaoi. You did a good job. If you write more yaoi fanfiction of Beyblade or any other anime, keep up the good work. Don't feel pressure to have to raise the yaoi level to an extreme level by adding crud like buttsex. I don't even consider that yaoi, I consider it downright disgusting. Sorry if I'm mentioning it. But, yeah, you did a good job. Good work. And the plot was good too. Again, I liked how it was built up to the romance.
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