| "The Lesson" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kyuuni_The _Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 11:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww come on yoai is hot plz put more to it i want to see if naruto learned his lesson
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 20:56 CST
Comment/Review:
nice
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Reviewed By: alonie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was neat and not bad for a first try. i hope i can do as well for my first try. you can inprove but i like the twist!
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was different....but...WOO!!!! YAOI RULES!!! okay. had to get it out, this was a very good story, interesting that Naruto can really be so defenseless ^^
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