| "First Love" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: Exaltation [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter!! Keeps you in angst!! Wondering what's going to happen next! Can't wait til next chapter!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:58 CDT
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NEED MORE im glad that kagome wants to stay with youko...i mean what girl wouldn't!! update soon
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 02:05 CDT
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I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter to come out!!! YOUKO!!! Yeah! She get's to see him again! I can't wait for it! And the rose! I loved that part! AHHHH!!!! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Exaltation [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that chapter was very well developed and creative. It's quite nice to some style in writing. Nice fanfic!
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Reviewed By: fire_lily_fox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 18:37 CDT
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I am sorry to say this but good bye Aki. I never really liked him anyway. He liked Kagome and Only kurama/youko can love her
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Reviewed By: VixenOfTheFlame(nl) On: March 26, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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My heart is racing!! Is she going to see Yoko next chapter!! Does she still have the rose in her hand? Is Kuroune goin to question her about the rose. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Baka007 On: March 25, 2007 22:12 CDT
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YAY!!! it's sad to see him go, but i'm happy that Akihiko is out of the way...now there's only room for Youko!!! yay!!!! ^_^ I do know that no one should even attempt to do anything to Kagome...because if Youko found out he'd probbaly have there head...and i do hope Kurone isn't foolish *sigh* but we'll never know untill you update now shall we ^_^ hehe i hope that you update soon and ur muse never leaves you. JA!
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Reviewed By: gerg1 On: March 25, 2007 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
veryvery very wonderfullll !!!! hope u update rally really soon !!! PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: El Ahrairah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That's so sad! Poor Aki. Update soon please?
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 08:51 CDT
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0MG I can't believe they just did that to poor Aki. Did Youko send Kurogane to do that or di he do it on his own? Or does Kurogane even know about Kagome??? NEED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. so i hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: baka007 On: March 19, 2007 03:23 CDT
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luffed it ^_^ i like this story and i look forward to your update...gah i wish youko would hurry up and go after her... and why doesn't she just tell her mom she doesn't want to >_M gah ok well i like ur story and i hope you update soon ^^ Jan e!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 03:45 CDT
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I liked this chapter. Yep! Very nice! Update soon!
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: angel9 On: March 17, 2007 20:47 CDT
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I have been coming back everyday to th ite waiting for yourupdate. The story is awesome and romantic. The last chapter was great as always. Keep it up
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH please update soon!! I love this story and can't wait to read more. Please tell me that Youko is going to steal her back... I'm on the edge of my seat...
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 16:15 CDT
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I feel really sorry for Kagome/ The way she now has to go to Aki and how Youko left her! *bad youko* LUV IT! update soon
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