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| "Play of the Fates" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Peldor [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that having recreantly seen the "Seed" series this story has me hooked! Athrun x Cagalli is my favorite pairing, Kira x Lacus pairing was just weird, no sparks at all, Lacus is just too innocent and childlike in her actions. Cagalli seems like she would be a little firebrand though, being a little tomboy I always thought that her and Athrun would complement each other well (both as friends and romantically). Your writing style is refreshing compared the average fanfic. While reading I didn't see any grammatical or story structure errors. The story was also very descriptive and well thought out with an interesting story arc that kept me guessing and wanting to read the next chapter! I would really love to see this story continued. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: be_your_self4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving this fic and loving the fact that you updated even more... Can't wait for the next one!
| Reviewed By: ***lakusu yamato ** On: October 23, 2006 16:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is hot, hot, HOT!!! :D Seriously, I love how it's well-written and sexy. =3 Keep up the awesome work!
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