| "Life In A Bottle" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 12:52 CST
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nice works, but are you using time-shifts? it seems like each chapter is farther and farther away, timewise, from each other... but maybe it's just me, and i don't undertand.. did you make up a character? and did Ku-Fei imagine him saying "Sunshine"? or did he actually say it
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 15:38 CST
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nice story, and in what volume of the manga does this take place in... is it after the festival?... we obviously it is... hm... i guess i can live with the giveaway... i know that she and Negi are related somehow... meh, nice chapter and good job with the Wanderer's voice-from-everywhere... i'll keep reviewing, and i'll probably write a valentine's day one-shot... hope you'll check it out
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 21:48 CST
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well, thank YOU for writing such a good story. Well, to be honest... I enjoy reading and reviewing good stories... I think of it as my unofficial job... unofficial cus im still in high school... but hey, whatever.. and thanks for actually recognising me... most people just say a general "thanks" to the reviewers, but w/e i'm a Nobody... thanks for listening to my little rant
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 18:48 CST
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i love it, but i can't believe that Nodoka's just gonna let Negi and Chachamaru do that.... after what she's been told by Serac... i loved the scene betwen chacha and negi, kinda felt for ku-fei it happened a long, long time in my past... for a girl... damnit.... memories are back, i'll dropp off another review when i have my emotions under controll again.... bye bye...
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 07:22 CST
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i guess i can try, but i'll drop off anyther review when i get back home, track is good an all, but it eats up my tim....
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Reviewed By: Master Masa Random On: December 05, 2006 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Er... well I guess it's tough for me to review this again... but eh, it's great work, you've really tied in everything from your previous works and kind of showing the effects of the aftermath, kind of like post-war isn't it? Well keep it up buddy, you know I'll read to the very end!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 21:04 CST
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i guess, what they say after he comes to in the infermery..... and what ku-fei says and does to connor, know what i mean? and it was funny, sad, and a little confusing at the same time..... all i can say is, wow.... well, maybe also "keep up the good work"
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 23:15 CST
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steriotypes are ignoreable, if you understand that he is joking.... to a degree.... and i guess being all knowing has it's perks, and problems.... but i guess Serac has no choice.... nice chapter too, makes poeple think about the atrocities of mankind....
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 23:07 CST
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cool chap.... and i can overlook the religion thing..... anyway, i can not wait for Serac to explain.... or for negi's date...
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 16:42 CST
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wow... what connor did was over the top.... but hey, it helped her confidance issues... so whatever... in anycase, is nodoka with The Wanderer? and i can't believe negi's gonna go out with someone he doesn't even know.... and chacha's got emotions now? cool... GO CHACHAMARU!!!! hey, what can i say... she's cool... read book10 or 11.. chachamaru rocks
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 12:43 CST
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hot coffee..... i still don't know what that is.... nor do i want to know..... and nice chappie.... and 'It's the schoolgirl-love-sparkle.....to a degree that I've never seen before" line kills me.... and i agree with connor... the guy that handed him the icecream is a bad-ass... and is that an actual brand? i'm doubting it, but seriously.... it sounds good enough to spend eternity in Hell...
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 12:09 CST
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Heh heh heh... i love philosophical conversations.... almost as much as i love a good game of Go.... too bad i can never find either..... and i pretty much understand everything The Wanderer said.... and yes, i am 14.... and no... i wasn't confused....
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 11:57 CST
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i see... kinda like the monsterin Prince of Persia: The Warrior Within.... it hunts him down because he was supposed to die..... very nice... can't wait to read the other chapters... and i think i do understand what's goin on...
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 11:49 CST
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oh,jeeze.... i'm sorry bout not reviewing..... i just didnt seem to have any time.... >.< being a freshman is tough.... especially with quarterlies.... and other exams... and now i got a reserch assignment on Ebola.... anyway i'll make sure to review some time... i'll probably finish reviewing all the chapters that are uploaded right after i finish this review... remember... one revew per chapter... =p and i'm your brother now?
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Reviewed By: Raedric On: November 10, 2006 09:59 CST
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Well, look at this story that I have totally never seen before. I must be stalking you through fanfic sites, I swear to God. You already know my opinions for this story, and they all sound like "great."
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