| "Hanyou & Miko: The Way It Should Be" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: woah
Reviewed By: tsubasa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest with you, I enjoyed it. Its different from the many others that I've read and it made sense, it was sad which makes me wanna hurt you but it was a good story so I wont. Keep up the good work despite what others might say. Writing is an art form & it takes creativity and a lot of imagination to make it good along with puncuations, spelling and grammar. You have a few mistakes with spelling and grammar every now and then, but it isnt too big. So just proofread it once or twice and it should be fine. Once again I enjoyed your story with this twist and keep up the good work.
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Title: BITCH
Reviewed By: half-0inu kagome On: December 08, 2006 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
who da fuck do u think u r how can u live with your self writting this shit you and yo bastered freind can suck my dick while your burning in hell omg i cant beleive dis shit where is yo fuckin mind you didnt evan do a disclaimer i hope you get sued omg go to hell do u eva rite another peice of shit like dis BITCH~!
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Title: i hate u
Reviewed By: omg u meanie On: December 07, 2006 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg what is rong with u some one need to do what you just wrote to you u killed kagome and inuyasha you fic was so un real and you didnt even finish it right what about songo miroku shippo kadea
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't like you. I really don't like you at all. That was so sad. I thought you wouldn't kill them but you did, so I love you (like a sister) Because I kinda get tired of all the InuYasha and Kagome get separated stories then by some miricle they get back together and live happily ever after. Pft. You made a new twist to it and I think that was one of the best InuYasha fanfics I have ever read. Thankyou. It was truly beautiful.
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