| "Purity of Snow: Trials of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know wat i agree that u have natural talent i was hoping the show would go like that but u have enough natural talent in my book so u should keep on writing for this story...lol really.
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a pretty good story and i liked it more because my favorite pairing is naru/hina but wat i didnt like (and this cost u the point) is that u ended it too soon for wat i think i was hoping ud tell more but oh well.
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Title: I liked it! its great!
Reviewed By: Hobbesthebrainslug [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is pretty good! is this your first work? if so you have some natural talent! you should seriously start writing as a hobby. i think with some practice you could get really good at this.
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