| "strange love but true love" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Millie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 15:11 CST
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You're story is really good, but you make a lot of mistakes, and it makes it hard for people to understand what you're saying. You should re-read what you wrote and correct your mistakes. |
Reviewed By: Crowsi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 03:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic's great! You HAVE to update soon |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 16:00 CDT
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hey chiara you help me now i'll help you, you could....
* Bulma finds out she's pregnate
* they get back to late and Bulma and Vegeta's new girl have to fight for him
or the ship that Kakkrott and Bulma is on gets attacked and Vegeta has to come save them
this fic is brill to you have great ideas you could probaly wright a book |
Reviewed By: Heikgan On: August 30, 2002 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Right i've read all of your fics you must update *really lame scary voice* UPDATE * Crikets laugh at me* ok diffrent approach *puppy dog eyes* update PWEASE
Ja 'Ne |
Reviewed By: smitten_kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think i would like it a lot better if there weren't so many spelling and grammar mistakes. |
Reviewed By: vegetasmoon On: June 29, 2002 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic update soon. I know what it's like to beg for reviews, It's not fun. |
Reviewed By: Allie On: June 24, 2002 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked please continue. oh yeah one more thing i don't want to be rude but you had a lot of spelling and grammar errors you might want to check it out, but beside that it was a great fic like i said before PLEASE continue |
Reviewed By: trel8553 On: June 10, 2002 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO you can't stop writing you have to finish the story or i will go crazy(and by crazy i mean i'll take a frying pan and go crazy*like chi chi hehehe*) because i didn't no how it ended SO PLEASE OH PLEASE FINISH THE STORY It's one of the best fan fics i've read in a long time |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, Sis keep writing. But keep me out of the Disclaimer next time Bye, your Big brother |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl On: May 05, 2002 14:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good. but u should make the chp's a bit longer. update soon. i want to know where vegeta went!!!!lol |
Reviewed By: Keruseyu_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2002 10:07 CDT
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thnk thnk thnk thnk YOUUUUUUUUUU really good job, im glad bulma has her mind set, i would do the same thing. POWER TO DA LADIES!!!! plz continue soon!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Keruseyu_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2002 11:55 CDT
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damn you, you stopped at a really really really really good part!!!!!!!!! im gonna add this story to my faves list so plz continue writing!!!!
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Keruseyu_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2002 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooooooooo good job!!!! plz get the next chap up SOON!! |
