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"Seperated but Together" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Title: AWESOME!!! ^.^
Reviewed By: Momijilol [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 03, 2007 16:19 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow....*wipes away remains of nosebleed* wow...you're a great author, please keep writing, I really enjoyed this one!! Well...see you later I guess...*waves*
 Reviewed By: Blacklightkitty  On: December 22, 2006 10:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't know why people always end up marrying there cusions, ya know in royal or whatever families, that always happens! And then they wonder why there start to be crazy people with mental problems in there family, cuz u're not soppose to inbreed to much, and if u didn't u wouldn't have retard babies! And that's why only Lee can have Neji, and why Neji and Hinata shouldn't get married.
 Title: sup
Reviewed By: blacklightkitty  On: December 09, 2006 14:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Sry to review so late, just now found your story. Anyway, i can't wait to see were this is going. If Neji will be found out, and get in trouble for his love for Lee (girly sigh) It could end up like romeo and juliet...well kinda.
 Reviewed By: Blacklightkitty  On: November 01, 2006 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Hot, that's all there is to it,lol. Please continue.
 Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: Shinigami24  On: October 31, 2006 19:16 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*grins* You just made my day! I despaired of finding a decent NejiLee lemon, that wasn't rape! I only like Gaara or Neji with Lee! Or both, if they're willing to share! Naruto belongs to Sasuke and vice versa. I think Choji is straight, and Kankuro is way too weird...I cannot see Shikamaru as seme, I think he's way too submissive...Kiba belongs with Shino and vice versa. Anyway, loved this chapter!
 Reviewed By: Blacklightkitty  On: October 28, 2006 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this it's good. Not very many people do this couple. Actually you're the first, i think it's a cute couple. It was very romantic, and well writen. But, could you maybe just space the paragraphs father apart? I'll keep ready if you keep writing. Blacklightkitty

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