| "Ranma/Knights of the Old Republic" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u should try posting this inthe ranma section on fanfiction.net u would make alot of people happy!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 19:11 CST
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Hmmm, teacher seems like a popular option. Neh. Continue to update like this, these last 4 chapters have been highly entertaining. Still, Akane is gonna have to grow up. On the other hand, what about Ryoga? They never did actually meet, did they, since Ranma met him when they were like 10 or 12. Anyway, update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Danesi On: December 26, 2007 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, Only read up to the end of chapter 2, but I've gotta say something. How exactly is your Ranma, well, Ranma? You're taking him away long before any defining traits have really settled in, and you've admitted you plan to omit a Jusenkyo curse. About the only things defining him as Ranma is being tossed in a pit of cats, and his name. I've also noticed you tend to explain rather than show, which generally leaves readers bored and unwilling to continue reading. A little exposition is fine, but when nearly half a given chapter is composed of it, reading tends to feel like a chore, rather than an enjoyable way to pass the time.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent update.
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Reviewed By: S Cubed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 23:43 CST
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I like it so far. It's a little bit of Ranma and a lot of Star Wars, but I think the exposition does this kind of fic good in the long run. Can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 04:35 CDT
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Very good, really like how you combined the two for the story that you have. Really can't wait for more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. It would have been a short fic if Nodoka hadn't allowed Ranma to leave with Revan ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter. A little bit heavy on the Jedi and Sith history side, but excellently written. Definitely the best Ranma/SW crossover I've read so far.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. Can't wait for more. But I hope that Ranma will obtain his curse. After all, Ranma without a curse is not really Ranma ^_^
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Reviewed By: Strike On: December 17, 2006 22:24 CST
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I like this crossover!
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