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Title: The End
Reviewed By: flower28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2009 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you don't mind my saying, I am disappointed in The End. The story just stopped. There was so much to be wrapped up, at the very least between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Based off the wish Kagome made there is still Kohaku and the slayer village, and Kikyou to be addressed. I was left hanging, wondering what was going to happen next because it felt like there should be more to the story. It made me sad... Will there be a sequel? Something that picks up where this leaves off and ends with how the painting came to be. That would make me happy...
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Title: Paybacks A Bitch: Pt 2
Reviewed By: flower28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The thing seance with InuYasha's Mother was rather cruel. A very low blow for Kagome and I am greatly disappointed in it. It was very cruel. However, bright pink hair?! OMG!!! I'm on the floor!
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Title: Paybacks A Bitch: Pt 1
Reviewed By: flower28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished Paybacks A Bitch: Pt 1 and I'm loving it! You're so clever!
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 22:29 CDT
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Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kirabates [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 00:06 CDT
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I can't wait for the update. I have knocked this story out in three days around homework and work-work. I really want to read more!!! Thanks for writing, UPDATE SOON!!!! PWEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 06:42 CST
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How the hell can she not see that the sight that she saw was an illusion...come on hopefully she will see through it in time! Will Sess be ok in time to kill Naraku???
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Title: Hehe!! Sesshy is a softy!!
Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. So I think that Sayori and Sess are Kagura and Naraku in disguise!! And this is either alot like Harry Potter in the fact that when Naraku is near, her mating mark burns, like Harry's scar burns when Voldemort is near!! OR! Her mark burns when he is cheating on her!! Well, either way, I think I definately agree with Ztatsylime!! They have a great explanation!! I just can't see Sayori being a spy for Naraku considering Koga is her brother!! :D
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Title: boo-hiss ^_^
Reviewed By: Ztatsylime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so I'm guessing that Naraku saw Sesshomaru and Kagome on thier little walk so he desiguised himself as Sesshomaru to use their love to break Kagome even more so he can get complete control over her soul like he had the whole time with Sayori who was a spy on the group. Poor InuYasha's gonna get his heart broke again. :P Thats bad karma for you. but yeah, so the groups going to break and have thier own little war when out pops Naraku who then trys to take Kagome but Sesshomaru, who is trying to clear his name, gets in the way and is seriously hurt for a demon then thats when Naraku reviels his latest plot. Which is bad cause thats is what really pisses off Kagome. So she goes all super human and purifys everything around her, Naraku and the other demons. Thats right, sesshy-shipo-inuyasha etc. only temporarly of course but it completly heals sesshy and (more smoke and mirrors) Inu Taisho appears and heals Narakus mateing mark on Kagome so she and Sesshomaru can offically be together wilst granting Kagome a fang of her own that she can infuse her spirtiual powers into without interfering with the demonic energy infused into it. ^_^ a bit cheesy but you tweek it and see if its what you like. Short but sweet summary here. Military puts your mind on the fritz ^_^ Weeeeeeeee, I love this story and I was seriously about to track you down and mentally smack you. grrrrrrr Do not mess wit the fluff!!! Buwhahahahahaha! *smack* ha ha ha, please update soon!!! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I've enjoyed the story so far, though I just want to correct all the grammar ans spelling mistakes! Sorry, it's the teacher in me :) I think that "Sayori and Sesshoumaru" are Kagura and Naraku in disguise - and the mate mark tingling is proof that Naraku was nearby. Hope you can update soon!
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 09:38 CDT
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Well I am assuming the burning of her mark is signifying that Naraku is cheating on him and they are posing as Sess and Sayori. To try to hurt Kagome more and keep her unhappy. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your writing is amazing and has such depth of imagination. I loved reading these and hope to read more VERY soon! Kagome is stronger than most and she can come out of this pain and will need the love and support of her friends... especially Sesshomaru. She has to know that rape is not the end of her life and a new chapter is beginning which will make the payback for Naraku all the better. Love finds a way to overcome such tragedies and in this case time and death so Kagome and Sesshomaru will make... with time and healing. Can't wait to hear whats next.
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really loved it hope tp read more soon
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 09:38 CDT
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Another awesome chapter. I really feel Kagome's pain and fear. Though I have never been raped my oldest sister has been and she pretty much reacted the same way. I look forward to reading more in the future and can't wait for them to finally meet up with Naraku. Though I wonder if there is a positive side to Kagome being Naraku's mate...could she possibly be able to sense where the coward is hiding?
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 06:16 CDT
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I'm sorry to hear that..and I hope you will be able to make it though your trubbled times...you and Kagome it seems....and Sesshomaru because he can't be happy....but I saw hope in this chapter that it would be true that this would inevenivtable be the downfall of Naraku and make be some day Kagome can find happiness in the person she was ment to ... we can only hope......................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 21:36 CDT
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oh this is very good. hope you update sooon
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