| "Will You Promise To Love Me" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Title: Good Work
Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really nice fic and I would have never thought of to use this plot for a yaoi Naruto fic. I haven't reviewed much lately but I have read many of your stories. I re-read Between A Rock And A Hard Place, The Art of Business, and Brother's Can't Be Trusted; basically all your Naruto fan-fics. I really liked Between A Rock And A Hard Place which is why I re-read it so I was eager to see if you could keep up with this writing style and continue to capture my mind. Well you did and I'm really glade I'm spending my third day in a row to read your work. I also really enjoyed Brother's Can't Be Trusted. Who knew I could enjoy a perverted Sasuke and Itachi so much. But alas I'm on your last Naruto fan-fic and I probably will move on after this only coming back if to continue to read either these or anything else new Naruto you make. I find it hard to believe that some are completed though and I was wondering besides Brother's Can't Be Trusted, what is truly completed? Wow I think this is the most I've ever commented an author I like and I mean Nita-sama's work what really good too. But alas I'm coming to a closing in my praise, at least until next time *winks* so without further ado which was my main reason for writing this review is have you heard of Kare Kano: His and Her circumstance? If so this is where you got that theme right? Knowingly or unknowingly I've read but all a chapter and a half and this goes exactly like that manga to a "T" and a dotted "i". The only this is that the manga wasn't a yaoi and that the boy fount out the girl was a total slob when at home and terribly rude. I guess that and even the girlish figure all describe Naruto so it's a really good role for him to try out. I'm looking forward to finishing this fic today and any other new Naruto things you create. I was also wandering if you'd make a fic where Itachi actually gets Naruto. I really like ItaXNaru fics about as much as ItaXSasu ones but I'm not sure what are your views on doing an incest fic since I haven't seen you hint to much on it in any of your work. I look forward to this not being the last time I review Ninamori-sama and keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 15:52 CDT
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itachi is sucha bastard! especially in this chapter. & naruto cant be dead! ill cry if he is. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: greycat62 On: June 05, 2007 10:03 CDT
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I really want to read this but your spelling is so poor that I can't get past the first sentence. In the summary, instead of smartest, you use smartess. I thought maybe that was a typo. However, in your first sentence, you start with 'A pond'. With much head-scratching, I realized that you meant 'Upon'. Maybe English is not your first language? You are getting rave reviews. (I'm suprised someone gave you a 9 out of 10 for spelling and grammar.) But I've already read enough fanfics that give me a headache.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 15:03 CDT
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well im happy sasuke won. but now he has to get naruto. & the cliffy made it worse. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 15:36 CDT
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*gasp*NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...not after all they've bn through...awwww....now i'm sad:(....but i'll feel better don't wry^^*giggles*...this is a really nice fic...plz update soon^^
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Reviewed By: Mimikosayachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 12:46 CDT
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CONTINUE! PLEASE! if you dont, i will hunt you down and FORCE you to. so, the strabger...it was itachi? you made a few mistakes in the spelling
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: dark karena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 08:48 CDT
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wow plz tell me you will update soon and yeah that witch tsubaru got it comeing to her oh yeah this rocked
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 16:53 CDT
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stupid cliffys. good chapter tho. & sasuke better win. i look forward to reading the next chapter so update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 21:30 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...i hate suspence!...anyway...ooooooooooooooo....it's gettin good^^
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 16:33 CDT
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those were good chapters. now i wanna c wat happens w/ the fight w/ sasuke & neji. i hope sasuke wins after wat naruto had 2 go through. lol. anyways, update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 19:16 CDT
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omg yay^^...i would have eternally hated u if that 1 girl won...gosh i'm happy...i hope sasuke doesn't lose!!!!(hint hint)^^
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Mixed-Starz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 08:43 CDT
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0.o I am stars struck ya know. Yr story is great! Update soon ne? >.< Yeah!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Immortalninja009 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 11:41 CDT
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You finally updated! This should be a good fight!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 19:10 CDT
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this match should be good. & i agree w/ u, poor naruto! lol. i cant wait 2 read the rest of the story. update soon plz.
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Title: Read twice
Reviewed By: Immortalninja009 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 16:27 CST
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I read this story months ago and loved it. I read it again and I still love it! I SO gotta see that fight!
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Title: Damn!
Reviewed By: HowlingHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This rocked! I hope there's more to come! Also, I love how you have Kakashi and Iruka are together! You're the best! Also, that wench that thinks she owns Sasuke should die! Mwahahahahaha!!!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 23:04 CDT
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u finally updated!! yay!!!! sry 4 wat happend w/ mediaminer. that mustve sucked. n-e way, this chapter was awesome. i cant wait 2 c Naruto's and Tsubaru's fight.
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