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| "Unexpected Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: Anon1234 On: May 10, 2008 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, what a piece of drivel. You write like a little kid.
| Title: the whole story= MAGNIFISCENT
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this fic was really good!!! i am so looking forward to another gravitation fic! =D and please please please write a love and a trigun one >_< and omg you're such a good writer! i am so going to continue reading all of your stories♥ [at least the animes i know] THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS ^_^
| Reviewed By: Jasmine/beau_tifulluv On: May 18, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, and I'd like to congratulate you on doing such a wonderful job on your fanfic. I truly enjoyed it. Eww, I sound like such a dedicated reader. lol. Yeah, but I basically rated this fanfiction a 9 overall because I loved it. I only noticed the occasional error, maybe one or two per chapter, which is really good. And it was so good that I may have to consider taking a cold shower. lol, Just kidding, but I would love it if you could write a sequel or just another Gravi fanfic. Yeah, that's mainly what I wanted to say, and just that once you get to know me better, from reviews and such, I will loosen up amazingly. You should see all the other reviews I write. lol But yeah, I Luv Ya!!! ¢¾ And your writing, keep up the good work. ☺
| Reviewed By: missbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fanfic and I think that you should continue it. Maybe you could use M-Preg to continue, or if you don't wish to go that route, then maybe...oh great! Now I've forgot what I was going to say! ^_^ I'm a little bit of a space head, but that's okay, right? I really enjoyed every aspect of your story, although I think you could've developed the Hiro/Suguru relationship a little bit more. Although I do realize that they weren't the focal point of your story. And then there is still the fact that Tohma is in love with Eiri, but I didn't really see that in this fic, which made it unique, but maybe he was a little OOC. But I would seriously enjoy it and be terribly happy if you could continue. For me? Eww, now I sound all professional. By the way, my name is Jasmine, and if you wish to talk more with me my email is urbeautifulsunshine@hotmail.com . Thank you for a wonderful story and always remember this...I LOVE YOU!!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: xunxin On: March 05, 2007 09:31 CST
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awesome. i've been waiting for this chapter. finally yuki gets shu. i was just relieved when shu finally realized he loved yuki and not tatsuha. yippie! cnat wait for the last chapter. update soon.
| Title: Awwww
Reviewed By: HowlingHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 09:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapt! I give you two thumbs up on the presentation...I can't wait to see how you end this...but I do feel a little sorry for Tatsuha. But hey...I lv Yuki! So Nah! :P Anyway, I suggest something fluffy for the end...but not too much. As they say, fluff is nice and all, but too much can kill a person...anyway, I bet alot of people just want a lemon...and I'll admit...I'd like to see one too...but you are the author, so it's all up to you... I hope the next chapt comes out soon! Ja! HH;
| Reviewed By: xunxinkohakubara On: January 14, 2007 20:59 CST
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AH! Shuichi is soooooo CLUELESS. its driving me insane! dammit eiri, steal shu away already. oh, and tatsuha is just annoying, i reread what tatsuha said before and after he proposed and he purposely through shu into a corner. saying, 'oh is you dont wanna hurt me anymore...' god i hate him! great chapter though. update soon.
| Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, come on, that is so evil, uh, will he say yes, or no, there are the pros and the cons, uh my head hurts, well update soon, please and let me now okay
| Reviewed By: amberKOHAKU On: November 21, 2006 10:34 CST
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the answer is noooooooooooo! he should say no and then run off to eiri. yep. cant wait for more.
| Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 04:43 CST
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This is a really good story but...will Shuichi stay with Tatsuha!? Wont Shuichi and Eiri be together!? Whats going to happen!?
| Reviewed By: amber KOHAKU On: November 07, 2006 10:31 CST
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this tatsuha/ shuichi love is making me gag. too sappy. AH! LOL!! Eiri rescue him please before i go insane. good chapter by the way. very nicely done. cant wait for more.
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