| "The love trap" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: crazy_neko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 15:10 CST
Comment/Review:
thx abercrombie...this was my goal..to try and transmit the "fuzziness" I felt when thinking and writing the story. I'm just sorry I don't have the time to write more...:(((
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Title: abercrombielvr07
Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! This is my second time to read it and i must say... It never gets boring!
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Title: My opinion :P
Reviewed By: Miss Pitzy On: November 04, 2006 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, first of all in my opinion the story is kind of short & should have a sequal.There are a lot of things that remain a mystery even in the end. Secondly,some events/feelings aren't as detailed as I would like.Some exprimations that are supposed to increase the mystery of the fairytale are not that ambiguous or are semi-superficially treated(from my point of view, anyway).Also some phrases are ambiguous in meaning but if you read the whole paragraph you get the ideea(or perhaps it's just me after only max 3 hours of sleep). All in all, the story is great.My advice is to read it!(honestly,although I made a lot of comments that have a negative perspective). You won't regret it!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: anaP On: October 31, 2006 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice storry,when u finish it u find out that u want more... more of the passion, more of the love...
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