Reviewed By: fullmetalfemme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done in the way it used the the character's dreams and wove them into the body of the story. I also appreciated the fact that it was nice and "lemony," but also had a bit of action and plot to move it all along, with the evil youkai wench. The whole story was not just "sleep with me/no,I can't sleep with you/but you want to sleep with me/but I can't sleep with you.." or "come over here so I can force myself on you because you know you secretly want it..." etc.etc.etc. ad nauseum! There seems to be story after story along those lines, so it is always nice to see one that breaks out from the mold. I hope to see further chapters of this one, and see the relationshiop developed further!!
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