| "Who d'ya love?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: daiyumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 23:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. All the tension in between Sanzo and Gojyo are making me think unclean thoughts! It would be nice if the chapters could be a bit longer though. Are Sanzo's actions going to scare off Gojyo?... Hopefully not! -waiting anxiously for the next chapter!- Gojyo is just sooo adorable!
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Reviewed By: daiyumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 01:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm actually waiting on an update for this one! I wonder who the pairing is going to be, hopefully not the common canon pairings Sanzo/Goku and Gojyo/Hakkai. Or the even worse pairing of Sanzo/Hakkai! (O.o) Sigh...... Sanzo/Gojyo sure does sound nice. It's just too bad this fic is rated T....
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Title: NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!
Reviewed By: cloud999 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so first off, you made Goku sound too smart. I liekd it all, except for Goku's part. He. Sounded. To. fUCKING. Smart. So there. Hahahahaha. So um yeah. But other then that, PLEASE FOR THE LONG OF GOD UPDATE!!!!!!!
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