| "Clippings and Snippets" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: Ninetailed Angel Projects [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... Well, Ino is one, obviously; was the other Kiba or something? o.o; Shot in the dark, obviously. But really, it wasn't much to go on. ^^; But good story... I'm not much for this type of thing, but that doesn't mean you didn't do a good job on it, for sure. ^^
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 10:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Its sad but its Kureni and Asuma but dont forget she's pregnant so she wont be alone for very long.
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Title: Hey! =^^=
Reviewed By: Ninetailed Angel Projects [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
... You're taking my suggestion about the vaccuum cleaner idea? o.o; And to think I picked it up from some random Ouran fic I read... XDD Awesome new piece! I'm jealous, really. But come to think of this, I just did something similiar on my fictionpress account... O.o; Meh, thanks for the great new piece!
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Title: Teehee...
Reviewed By: Ninetailed Angel Projects [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Try these: vaccum cleaner wind's kiss many colors XP Enjoy. I can't wait to see what you do with these.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Ninetailed Angel Projects [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about it; things always turn out crappy for me the first time I try and write a character. XP Even when I'm just starting a new anime, it takes me a while to hone the characters to what they're supposed to be. And again, Kakashi really IS a hard character to write; what you need to focus on is probably the few characteristics pointed out in the Kakashi Gaiden arc of the manga. He is a character that has a great sense of responsibility to others, and holds on to greif and guilt. He is a follow-the-rules type. I think that, for the most part, you might've done well, though. XP Maybe tweak your Sakura a bit... but that's just me. ^^ I hope you post again soon!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Ninetailed Angel Projects [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. O.o; KimiTayu... I think I've only read one before this, and I really liked this one. XP Please write more!
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Reviewed By: Ninetailed Angel Projects [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Storm is Coming and Voices Sing Silently also do something for this one... O.o; Scary, but good.
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Title: =^^=
Reviewed By: Ninetailed Angel Projects [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amen. -_-; I got an account on here because FF is screwing up so badly lately. It's even posting stories that AREN'T MINE on my accounts, deleting my stories without reason, not sending my review alerts... -_-; Anywho... LOVED the oneshot. Angsty, sweet, bitter and wonderful. (I was listening to the Tsubasa Chronicles OST when reading this (Siren Song and Lost Wings) and it REALLY did something for this story... XP)
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