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| "Unexpected Consequences" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: ElisavanYaslana On: December 30, 2008 02:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a lovely fanfic, the errors are minimal, if present at all (I noticed none), the Style of Writing is easy to read, yet catchy and unboring. The creativity is stellar and originality as well. The ability to tie in a multitude of emotions for all characters makes the story and the characters within well rounded and fun to read (since it makes more sense). Overall, I rate this story so far a '9' of '10', I did not reward a 10 because I felt occasionally that there was straying from the characterizations present in the original work "Yu Yu Hakusho" by Yoshihiro Togashi, and occasional presence of overreaction to certain events between some of the characters. A pair of minor flaws and easily overlooked. I love this story so far, please continue. Sincerely, ElisavanYaslana
| Reviewed By: Hiei Lover/yukina On: April 15, 2007 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awesome keep updating
| Reviewed By: xFluffiesGirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story keep updating
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