| "Envy My Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: lolololol On: May 12, 2007 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Spelling/grammar could be improved, though.
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 10:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. There are so many different things going on in it that my first thoughts on what would happen have changed to I honestly don't know. So far this is a great story. It has captured my imagination. I hope you are able to continue this one.
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Reviewed By: Foenix On: December 28, 2006 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This could turn into a very strong story. Your writing style shows a lot of potential, and you've really caught my interest. However, you desperately need to find yourself a beta reader. Get someone to edit the story, because the typos make this very difficult to read.
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Reviewed By: siyumi On: November 07, 2006 08:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I Loved your story please upload soon I am dying to find out how this is going to end.up date soon!
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