| "Lost in the Music" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Aww I want More
Reviewed By: Shikon Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww its soooooooooooooooooooo good can you make more pwease and the love parts are sooooooooo cute as well but I feel so sorry for Kagome though ugh that Kikyo bitch but I like your srory so please continue it its so good and the songs AWESOME I'll be waiting for more
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 04:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is pretty good so far, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: chiyosama808 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love music fics. Yours has a different feel to it. More believeable. Thank you and I can't wait to read the update!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: blah. On: January 08, 2007 21:36 CST
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yet again another awsome story from you : ) update soon can't wait : )
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Title: Luna the Inu-youkai
Reviewed By: Luna the Inu-youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 01:53 CST
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I like it! Usually I hate the fanfics that are placed int the present times but you make up for that in style. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great opening set up for a good story. i like the plot, and the character choices for the bands is superb! an interesting twist to make Rin the older sister, you don't see that much. kuddos for that. ^__^ i loved the introduction for sesshiles with the wife comment. swooning, seriously swooning over here. lucky girl...gr. anyway! ^__^ the only thing i noticed is the tenses that you write in. there were a few times, mostly when describing the outfits that they were wearing at the concert, that you slipped past tense explination for the story (they gathered together before going on stage) to a present tense narative (she is wearing...he is wearing...ect). nothing grave, just a thought to watch out for. ^__^ the story is awesome, you're doing a great job with it. keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhhh...GOMEN!!!! I was so busy i didnt get to read your fic. >< I love it tho, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor(NLI) On: December 11, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was outstanding, especially for your first fic! I think you incorporated the lyrics fairly well, as sometimes such a thing ignored me. But not in your story. I would love to learn more about Inu's and Kag's past romance, but I imagine that might be coming later. Well, I think you did an awesome job on the first six chapters and I can't wait for the rest! Loved it a ton.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 07:05 CST
Comment/Review:
YEah. Kick ass girls! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kikyo~must~Die On: November 30, 2006 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT,LOVED it!!!!!!!!! Great chapter update really sooon ^-^
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Reviewed By: . On: November 28, 2006 21:28 CST
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awsome story : ) update soon
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Awe.... it's okay to still love her Inuyasha. You and millions of other men are just stupid at making decisions. so don't fell bad. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 16:28 CST
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I love the story!!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: super_anime_fan4eva On: November 18, 2006 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool, but is kagz gunna like stay away fr. inu 4 a while or will they try 2 talk about wat happened after they moved? will san, mir try 2 pair them up? how bout the other couples? sry so many questions but this is a good story (VERY). Anyway sayonara ne? ~_~
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an update!!! hope to see more, i like it so far!^_^
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