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| "In My Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Connery On: November 02, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very cool! Totally did not see that ending coming. I really love your thorough descriptions of things and the gruesome bloody rain was a nice touch. This (the beginning anyways) actually reminds me of a Gundam Wing fic I started a long time ago, but never finished. This is awesome inspiration for me to attempt to finish it.. *two thumbs up*
| Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Raistlin Windblade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you always know how to twist the plot right into the climax and surprise the hell out of me! You did an awesome job with this, and in such a short time as well, which is what is amazing. you stuck with the story line and didn't stray from it, Jin explained everything to complete understanding and all in all: You wowed me, baby girl. You have definately got what it takes to make even a one-shot/short story into something never to forget. From the suspense to the chilling rythm of the plot line, I was hooked. Keep up the magnificent work! A grea Halloween treat, and I more than enjoyed it. Can't wait to see the next Jin x Touya story!
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